"a forgotten love and a forgotten child" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: TamaRose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2012 23:53 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: How could Inuyasha not tell Kagome her child was still alive? That just seems so cruel. Yes, I know she left without telling him she was pregnant but she thought he had betrayed her. He should understand that.I am just so disappointed in Inuyasha and what is worse is when Kagome finds out Inuyasha had her all along she will definately hate him for a very good reason. That is time she will never get back with her child.That isn't fair to her. |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 01:43 EST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: great update... poor kaida - she's lost and human and she bumped into kikyo... hope inuyasha & the others find her soon... will kagome figure out that kaida fell into the well... will inuyasha return kaida to kagome - when?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Title: Thank you Reviewed By: lifesabitch25 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 22:21 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Thank you. I was really hoping you would continue this story. I am so into this story and I love little Kaida.can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: >. Reviewed By: Koneko778 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 11:50 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OK you must continue one way or another. The poor girl.... I'm hooked please keep going.
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE!!!! Reviewed By: naomi_netsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 16:51 EDT Comment/Review: WOW! So you left us at a HUGE cliff hanger...PLEASE do not make something crazy like Kikyo taking in Kaida or something like that happen. and what happened to Inuyasha so that he can't take Kaida through the well and back to Kagome...this is really a heartbreaking story!
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 15:46 EST Comment/Review: I hope Inu finds Kaida soon. *did I spell the name right? :S* But Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: LusterBlossom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 01:21 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great story...I think Kagome and Inuyasha should be tigether again they're soo cute ^^
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 19:19 EST Comment/Review: awwwwwww a wonderful update from a wonderful person
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 16:56 EST Comment/Review: awesome update. It's been a while. I can't wait for the next one. I wonder...is Inu gonna check the well house? And go to the past? Maybe he isn't as dense as I thought he was. Lol. Keep up the good work, and keep the updates coming. Can't wait.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 20:41 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i liked this chap!!! 'sniff sniff' but it's sad!!! well UPDATE SOON!!! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENES NEXT!!!! U ROCK!!!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 08:38 EDT Comment/Review: im so dippressed make them find the child!!!!!! :'( ahhhhhhhh im sad now but awesome story XD
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 02:06 EDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really am liking the story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP!!! WHAT SUSPENSE!! YOU'R THE BEST!
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Title: Great! :D Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 17:57 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Awesome job, I love this story! I liked this line lol: "She looks more like Inuyasha trying to get out of a bath" I can't wait to see what happens next, so please update when you have the chance! ^_^
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 04:51 EDT Comment/Review: i love your work but it can be hard to read once and a while because of misspellings but if you put your heart to it i bet you can do it. keep up the excelent work and im really really looking forword to the chapters that lay ahead.
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 08:58 EDT Comment/Review: Woohooo! A New chapter! Woot! I hope Kagome goes through the well and she and Inuyasha are forced together again. Qoute quote, forced, end quote. Can't wait for more updates!
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