"a forgotten love and a forgotten child" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Title: good Reviewed By: meiscrazy4_Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 07:43 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This is turning out to be a good story can't wait till the end
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Title: Good job! :D Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 15:44 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Great chapter! This story is really creative, and i love reading it! I can't wait to see what happens to Kaida! Please update whenever u have time! ^_^
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Title: Great chaper! ^_^ Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 00:00 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like this story! It is so original, and it is enjoyable to read! I especially loved this part lol: He wouldn't of gotten too far anyway...with that load he's carying -_- Great job, and keep up the good work! :D
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Reviewed By: kagome9854 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 17:24 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great chapter.She gets to meet Shippo now! ^_^ Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 13:42 EDT Comment/Review: I review! i like this story, but Kaida is a little... scared for a hanyou. no ones gonna hurt her... i hope. she's in da feudal era! what happens? updates!
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Reviewed By: chiyosama808 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 15:40 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Oi! I really like the emotion that you put into the story and the characters. Things sound good. I hope that things work themselves out in the end. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 22:13 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: I think the chaps were boring but the plot was good. I sorta had the same idea for my fanfic, A better Future? try to entice with some suspense
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Title: inyo Reviewed By: inyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 18:26 EST Comment/Review: plz update sooner i love your fic
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Title: inyo Reviewed By: inyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 18:24 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: it was awesome .plz update sooner cause i dont like waiting
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Title: Great! Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 18:53 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is such a great story! It is really kawaii! ^_^ Plz write more asap!
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Reviewed By: Sacred Four Loves [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 18:53 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I love this story ~*~ Please write more, I really want to know how Kagome will react once she see Inuyasha again and how Kaida will react when she finds out that her best-friends, Inuyasha, is really her father!!!
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Reviewed By: kidloco [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 17:13 EST Comment/Review: i love it ^^ sit millionj time XD that the most funny thing can happen there jajaja inuyasha sit XD i wait evrythign go well wiht kagome and inu and kaida ^^ si good ^^
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Reviewed By: princessAly2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 16:26 EST Comment/Review: this story is great hope you continue it soon. Toodles ^_^
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Title: I'm Liking It... Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 05:59 EST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm in love with the latest chap but it made me mad when it ended the way it did... but I must learn to have more patience and trust that the next chapter would be just as good or better- poor yash, he has so much to do before gaining back Kagome's love, won't it be wrong if Kagome starts to go out with another guy while Yash is planning?- tee hee- evil thought- what would Yash do in the feudal era and how's he supposed to get to Kagome? Okay, shutting up- CAN"T WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: xAznPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 00:34 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: great chapter ^^ Inuyasha should confront kagz soon =D Kaida is sooooo cute! Update soon!!
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