| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: ledfan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great lemony goodness. your really good at writing this kind of thing. Just the right amount of description not to much and not to little gj
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Has this story been taken down? This was well done, I'd love to see more of your material. gg
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Reviewed By: I KNOW I've read this before! On: January 29, 2007 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I'm pretty sure I've read this before, with more chapters. What happened? Also, you had another fic, "Escort Duty." Are you gonna repost them anytime soon? Keep up the good work. They're both good stories.
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Reviewed By: goldie452 On: October 05, 2006 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude, so go for the naru/ino/saku threesome, that would be a real nice touch.
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Reviewed By: mydemise [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW rally great. The Naru Ino scene is the most graohic I hav ever read. The only way i think u could hav made the story better is if you had more of the Naruto girls like Hinata and Temari. But really great.
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Reviewed By: rasengan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is awsome i'ed loev to see a naru/saku/ino. I think it'd be a good development for the plot besides sakura took a big blow and i dont think it would be write to leave it like that. But its your fic you write it how you want it. I'll still like it either way.
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Reviewed By: Solar Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has some of the most graphic sex scenes I have ever read, keep up the good work! I wouldn't mind seeing a Naru/Saku/Ino combo. It sounds...interesting. Update soon!
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Title: UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: ninjakun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON!!! This story is awesome!! Love the Naruto/Ino pairing.
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: ninjakun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!! You HAVE to update this soon. It's an AWESOME story!
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Reviewed By: jtittr7 On: June 06, 2006 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
do the narusakuino thing please that would be great
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Reviewed By: sibs On: March 21, 2006 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!! There aren't a lot of Naruto/Ino fics out there. GREAT JOB
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Reviewed By: nasfast On: March 07, 2006 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a pretty good fic if you do it right it could be a great ongoing fic. And personally would like it if it was a naru/saku/ino fic.
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Reviewed By: raptix12 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done. Very good sensory details, and the Naru/Saku/Ino is a good idea.
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Title: What happened???
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I've read this before... but it had more chapters in it. And what's the deal with the history essay where your fanfic is supposed to be, and the acutal story up in the part where you are suppose to write the small details? Update this soon... and correctly, it's a super story with alot of potential.
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