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| "Only Time Will Tell" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] | Reviewed By: Dev the dog On: November 20, 2007 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stuff is great and you really got all the characters attitudes down packed, and I can't wait to see the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Apirant On: July 08, 2007 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are definitely better than me! Everytime I'd try to write those emotional times, I'd feel silly, but you are a master at this! I don't know Cosmo that much, considering I've only seen like 3 or 4 episodes of Sonic X, but I too have feel that Tails and Cream should be together. I hope for that next chapter is up soon!
| Title: woo
Reviewed By: TheRealScootTh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 10:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE DISPITE THE FACT I DON'T KNOW TAILS AND COSMO'S RELATIONSHIP YOU GAVE HER DEATH A LOT OF RESPECT GOOD I LOVE TAILS/CREAM AND IT'S FEATURED IN MY OWN FIC AND I AGGRE WITH MY MATE TheVulpineHero1 RITE MORE PLEASE
| Reviewed By: TheVulpineHero1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 05:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, your fic is really good. Poor old Tails, right in the middle of an emotional battle after losing his friend and now he's in love as well! I wish you'd update soon, I really love this fic. I think that Tails and Cream are the best couple EVER. Carry on with the good work!
| Title: CAN YOU DO NO WRONGE?!!!!
Reviewed By: tazkol master of the emeralds On: August 15, 2006 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are a true artist, this is the most artifully artful writing in history, i look forward to the next chapter, you have made my week with this chapter thank you, i never thought i'd see such perfection in the story! !_! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Tails_Worship14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 00:16 CDT
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I love this story! It's great! Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: i.am.someone On: May 08, 2006 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
u ave got to update this story ive been waiting so long 4 it i no it must be hard to right a fic but im really am desparet now soz if im being rude but thats just me.
| Title: Not bad...
Reviewed By: CJ the Cheetah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 05:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I admit I despise the TailsXCream pairing. So you're probably asking what made me read your fic... Well, the mention of Cosmo helped, I am a HUGE Cosmo fan, and unlike some people, I am GLAD you mentioned her in your fanfic and without bashing her. Most people I see these days are all "OMG COZMO STOL TAYULS FRUM CREEM SHE MUST DIE LOLZ!!!" or "SHE MAYDE TAYULS CRY!!!" or "SHEZ A SKANKY WHORE!!!" or whatever dumb reason people make up to hate her (all the reasons I see are dumb anyway). Anyway, back on topic... I like how you handled the concept. I was gonna write something like this myself but since I completely lost interest in TailsXCream, I never did get around to it and I probably never will. Anyway, I like how you're developing their relationship. I admit I rush into relationships a lot when I write (^^;), but I admire how you're taking the time with them and not making them completely OOC and all over each other in seconds. Tails is still grieving as is Cream and it will take time to heal from that as well. Plus they only see each other as friends at the moment, it will be hard to admit they're moving on, and Cream probably would feel like she's invading the place Tails has for Cosmo in his heart. I LOVE how you keep their innocence as well. It's in character, and it's perfectly presented. So yes, I hate TailsXCream but I loved this fic. What is this world coming to? XD
| Reviewed By: Cosmo rules! On: April 28, 2006 09:28 CDT
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Ignore YiffyOne's bullshitting about Cosmo. She is NOT a skank, she is NOT a hooker and she is NOT a sulk! He probably only hates her because of Tails/Cream like all the other retards. I honestly only read this because it mentioned Cosmo. At least you didn't bash her like all the other idiots... Good fic. It's drawing out at least...
| Title: please
Reviewed By: tazkol master of the emeralds On: April 21, 2006 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm sorry but i just had to say PLAESE update soon i know you can't rush art but this is better than art
| Title: Absolutely breath-taking!
Reviewed By: YiffyOne* On: April 17, 2006 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely, 100 percent agree with Tazkol on this one, 7 of 7 Emeralds. And you took my advice, and tried your hand at testing the limits of your wonderful imagery! And the results were phenominal!!! I can't believe how good it was! Unbelievable, it was beyond perfection, and beyond even my expectations! And I expected a lot from you to begin with! I'm stupified! I'm astonished! I'm... So proud of you! I was sort of testing you, when I suggested that you try your hand at capturing both the beauties and beasts of nature, and you passed with flying 'colours'! MAN! I'd always admired the way people from the United Kindoms write, sometimes I wish I could go there myself, but you surpass anybody I've ever read in a Sonic fic with imagery... You've far surpassed me already. And I feel no contempt, only pride for how you've made it blossom in only one attempt. Only one. You're a prodigy! The scenes with Tails and Cream were very dragged out, in a wonderful sort of way. I can tell it's going to take them a good long while to come to terms with their emotions... This would probably frustrate many fans, but I think it's perfect! It's my complete and honest belief that romance is best when it's dragged out to an excess. You can probably tell by the fact that I've written a romance oriented fic, and have gone 21 chapters with no real romance. I love making my reviewers wait, because I know the longer they wait, the better it will be when they finally get it. Anyway, Jen, I'm awed by your writing style. It shines brighter than the north star on a cloudless night, it glimmers more brilliantly than the most dazzling diamond. This fic, I shall recommend to my reviewers. They'll not get another update while this beautiful fic goes undiscovered, not on my watch. What? No no, don't thank me! It's the least I can do for being so graciously gifted with the sheer honor of reading this marvelous work of solid, yet supple beauty. The scenes were cute, and there were only two errors in the whole thing, and they were only two instances of repeating of words words like so so. Something I do quite often, nothing to be ashamed of, it's no matter, and it does not, in the slightest bit, diminish the delicate wonder of your writing. I honestly wish I could rate it 11 out of 10, and if I could, I would, because as I predicted, you did it. You went beyond perfection.
| Title: another one how do you do it?
Reviewed By: tazkol master of emeralds. On: April 17, 2006 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
anothe beuatiful chapter!. this is going to be one good and long story. out of seven choas emeralds i give you master choas control (all seven plus the master)
| Title: Do continue, eh?
Reviewed By: YiffyOne* On: April 15, 2006 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual, your writing's most defining quality is your fantastic way with imagery. I, as you may or may not know, am a lover of art, and, when writing a story, imagery is absolutely necessary. It invokes a person's ability to visualy percieve what it is you're trying to relay, and, rather than seeing it with your own two eyes, the picture is drawn within your reader's head, and, depending on how good your imagery is, the more clear, and detailed the mental image is. I simply can't stress enough that yours is absolutely fantastic, and, whether you're trying to captivate the reader by describing magnificent beauty, or horrify them by portraying repugnant hideousness, you do-so flawlessly. This is your greatest quality as a writer, so you'd do well to remember that, and show more visual ambience, between the actions of the characters. I do this at the beginning of every chapter of Miles Foxy; usually the first paragraph is my attempt at kicking the chapter off with a scene of poetic beauty. Starting a chapter with nature, and using lots of metaphorical speach to describe it is a fantastic way to show how nature is, at times, more humane than we are. This is not instruction, nor is it advice, it's a request. I'd love to see you try your hand at some real ambient writing... If my opinion on your style of writing is truly as well-founded as I think it is, then you should be able to, not paint, but write a perfect painting into my head. I'll say it once more, your imagery is ever-masterful. This is not only the scenery I refer to, but the expression of the characters, the way they move and react to every little thing, every lingering thought in the back of their head, and how they act upon it. I've detected no visual weakness in this chapter, not in the personality of the characters, nor your solid, charming way of crafting each sentence, mixing and matching the words as you see fit, and certainly not your extensive, yet comprehensable, and not overly redundant vocaburary. No, all of that is either fine, impressive, perfect, or better. Yes, in writing, I personally believe it's possible to go BEYOND perfect. Your imagery is perfect, but you can go beyond that if you put your mind to it, I bet. Now, as I was saying, the only visible flaw in this chapter, and I don't think this is your, but the site's fault (it's done it to me before) is that the spacing seems a tad messed up. There's no spacing at all... Sometimes the site does that. It's not a big problem, you should be able to fix that with ease. Now, last, but not least, the opening storyline. I, of course, am glad to see it's on route to a pairing of Cream and Tails, but one thing I really, really don't like about it,(and it's not your fault, seeing as, according to Sonic X, it IS in Tails's character) Is the fact that it contains even the MERE MENTION of that flowery, do-nothing hooker, Cosmo. For whatever reason, I HATE her. Perhaps it's because she honestly believes that, despite the fact that she has done ABSOLUTELY NOTHING, after the Meterex are defeated, SHE has defeated them, and gained her precious vengeance! I mean, what the heck?! All she did that WHOLE part of the season (besides piss me off) was SULK!! OMG, she was so horribly negative!! I pity the fact that her kin, family, her entire species were wiped out, but Jesus flippin' Christ! Being a pessimist isn't going to get you your revenge, you dumb skanky flower...thing! Only because, for whatever reason, the Sonic gang pitied her, and coinciadentally had their OWN reasons to fight the meterex, did she get 'her' vengeance. Her appearance bothered me. Her character infuriated me, and last but not least, the fact that Tails liked her, which, if you think about it, is totally agains any of his characteristics that the show PREVIOUSLY established... well, let's just say it was the straw that broke the camel's back. So yeah, I'm running out of characters for this review, so keep it up! 4000
| Title: great
Reviewed By: tazkol the master of emeralds On: April 08, 2006 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's beautiful! nuff said
| Reviewed By: tails_the_pimp [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 16:39 CST
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its good but sad i know cosmo died at the end but i diddnt see it i know its edited so ill just get pics of the ionternet or just get the jap dvds subtitles im working on one where cosmo come back dont ask how just wait and see
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