| "The End" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: fire maiden On: May 16, 2006 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! very creative and intresting! people are so mean not writing this! o well please update soon!
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Title: its me kogachic
Reviewed By: Author On: April 27, 2006 09:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok I know its 'blunt' because i wrote this when i was in 7th grade! my writing skills SUCKED...did i not say that in the first chapter? and it also says it i think in my other fanfic...(Hitting The Big Time)...which is ALOT better than this one..and another reason why some of it is so..blah...was because some days i wasnt in the detailed kinda mood and in others i wanted so much detail that it was crazy...so yeah...you under stand right?
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: April 27, 2006 01:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
in certain aspects, you're vague, but in others you're so blunt... it's strange and it makes for strange writing. you're writing could use some work. but keep trying. writing takes a lot of work, ne?
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Title: its me kogachic and not to happy either..
Reviewed By: Writer of this Fanfic On: April 19, 2006 09:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG come on you guys! Not a one review on the first thing i've ever written? thanks..that makes me feel so good about my writing skills you know? Almost 1000 people have read this damn thing and not a one has left even a "Good job."...grrr...its not that i hate you all now because I dont, its just I'm a little disapointed..just because i dont put "please leave a review" after every chapter dont mean to compleately ignore it! well im in school..so i gotta go...bye y'all! i still love y'all just a little dissapointed and pissed!
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