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| "The Cat That Came to Kill" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: AlixNix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 08:37 CST
Comment/Review:
please in clude Kiba?! I love him, he's soooooooo kool
| Reviewed By: Shadow Kairi On: March 01, 2006 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great comedy fic. You should continue the story and have Naruto suffer (as much as I hate that happening and get Sakura and Sasuke come back from the mission with Naruto half dead. Or, if you want an actiony end, have a demon released out of the cat and Naruto fights it with Kyuubi's chakra. Then the cat isnt evil anymore and when Sakura and Sasuke come back from the mission, Sakura finds out the cat doesnt scratch anymore..........bla bla bla.......those are just my ideas....you can use them if you like. But awesome fic!!! You have to continue it, I forbid you from abandoning it. Okay....I'm going to shut the hell up now. Please continue!!!
| Reviewed By: shocca [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is okay,i think its funny,u should finish it.
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