| "Total Fantasy (uncut)" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: diablo On: June 05, 2003 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was fun
good luck |
Reviewed By: . On: December 15, 2002 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story and your grammar is getting better. |
Reviewed By: Monkey_Tailed On: September 01, 2002 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Please PLEASE update this!!! Also...work a bit on the grammer... ;) |
Reviewed By: Kat On: April 17, 2002 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story alot. Can't wait to read more. Keep writting!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Vincent Price On: April 03, 2002 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a pretty good story but you seem to be immune to punctuation and spelling. Filthy, bloody filthy. I like it >:^)~ |
Reviewed By: Reiruri [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2002 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fairly good story, but there is hardly any voice in it. It's not very structured either. It is very original though. Nice job. |
