| "As Fate Would Have It" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Title: Awwww!
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 16:52 CDT
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It is so beautiful, and such an unusally story. It is really good. So, when is the next chap. coming? Please more, don't stop after I got hooked!
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Reviewed By: animecrazedgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 15:03 CDT
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I love this story so much! You have to update soon! How does Inuyasha reply to Minako's question? I want to know what he says! Update soon! I'm really enjoying this story!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 20:56 CST
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!nough said. ~Cicket42
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 09:41 CST
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loved it like always~Cricket42(write more)
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Reviewed By: Concerned On: March 05, 2006 23:26 CST
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I noticed you rewrote chapter 11 and wrote out the part where Kagome fought him with her fists trying to make him stop, which was very much a rape scene. You also drastically reduced the number of times Inuyasha 'thrust into her'. Now the scene is much less like a rape. Before the scene was written in such a way that it would be unrealistic for Kagome to ever forgive him. The scene has improved and allows room for them to reconcile now.
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 00:38 CST
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write more soon. i love the updated version.~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 20:14 CST
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more i demand more please???????~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 20:14 CST
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more i demand more please???????~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 19:28 CST
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Very enjoyable, though I do think Kagome's going a little heavy on the 'osuwari's.
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Reviewed By: Andrea C On: February 23, 2006 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very well done. I think going along with the story and making it a inu/kag is a good idea. Yeah lots of people make it about them (including myself) but most of the stuff out there are absolutely redicules. I also would like you to keep up with sango and miroku. It was really sweet when she fell asleep in his bed. I have not yet finished reading so I will get back to that. Bye... Firefly1012
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Reviewed By: stupid girl On: February 23, 2006 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
...will kagome and inuyasha get together? or inu and kikyou or kag and kouga?! will there ever be some lovin?! keh... i need fluff damn it.
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 23:44 CST
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yeah you updated i love the new chapter. though i think you should of had shessy fall over laughing just for fun. ;D love me~Crickt42
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is already in my favorites. Please update often or i'll go crazy waiting.~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: bk On: February 21, 2006 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. I will be watching for updates.
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Reviewed By: SadieLade On: February 17, 2006 19:32 CST
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Interesting story--I'd like to see what happens next with Inu, Kag, & baby...makes 3 ^_^
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