| "As Fate Would Have It" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg so a great fic=D and i cant believed it was ended with such a cliffy! cant wait to read the next one=D great jobXP
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Reviewed By: _luv_naraku_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i look forward to the sequal!
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Reviewed By: _luv_naraku_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i am so sorry to hear that you might have cancer. i hope that you will be able to fight the terrible battle of cancer. i am a christan, so i'll keep you in my prayers. My God watch over you, protect you, and bless you. ~*~Scarlet~*~
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Reviewed By: _luv_naraku_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ya, its not a rape.
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Reviewed By: Hanna-Bi82 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please add more Inuyasha storys
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Reviewed By: Hanna-Bi82 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 19:21 CST
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i love this story please keep it up
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: inugirl2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, nice. I spend all day and the rest of today reading this story all the way through. Lots of work! Thanks so much, you're very talented. I appreciate all the work!
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Title: Awwww!
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 16:52 CDT
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It is so beautiful, and such an unusally story. It is really good. So, when is the next chap. coming? Please more, don't stop after I got hooked!
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Reviewed By: animecrazedgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 15:03 CDT
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I love this story so much! You have to update soon! How does Inuyasha reply to Minako's question? I want to know what he says! Update soon! I'm really enjoying this story!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 20:56 CST
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!nough said. ~Cicket42
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 09:41 CST
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loved it like always~Cricket42(write more)
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Reviewed By: Concerned On: March 05, 2006 23:26 CST
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I noticed you rewrote chapter 11 and wrote out the part where Kagome fought him with her fists trying to make him stop, which was very much a rape scene. You also drastically reduced the number of times Inuyasha 'thrust into her'. Now the scene is much less like a rape. Before the scene was written in such a way that it would be unrealistic for Kagome to ever forgive him. The scene has improved and allows room for them to reconcile now.
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 00:38 CST
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write more soon. i love the updated version.~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 20:14 CST
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more i demand more please???????~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 20:14 CST
Comment/Review:
more i demand more please???????~Cricket42
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