Reviewed By:Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 22:59 CST Comment/Review: I believe I would find your story more interesting If I could actually read it. There are no spaces in-between anything. Not the begining, not in-between paragraphs, not even in-betweeen the begining adn the start of the story. Please correct these and I will be more than happy to read your story in it's entirety. Arie Date.