Reviewed By: Bookworm51485 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 13:18 CST
Comment/Review:
OH MY LORD!!! I could not read that, it was too painful. Why is it all in one huge block? Please, embrace the idea of spacing and paragraphs. Maybe if you do that, people might actually be able to read the story and give you feedback. I couldn't get past the first few lines.
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