| "Life Awakenings" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: shisouikari@gmail.com
Reviewed By: Rixii On: November 30, 2006 22:38 CST
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Read my review on "Wonderful Awakenings" to get most of the review for this one. I do have a couple additional comments for this sequel though. The grammar seems to have improved greatly though there is still a problem with some more advanced punctuation and a few words that sound the same but are spelled different (I forget the term at the moment). Overall I liked it..the only thing that really put me off was Amon's actions in the beginning - THAT'S WHY ALCOHOL IS BAD FOR YOU KIDS!! >_
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Reviewed By: ADarkNightsObsession (Portia) On: October 17, 2006 09:43 CDT
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YES SEQUAL! I have almost finished reading ALLLLLLL of your stories and you are a genious. I am officially in love with you. You are the all-mighty god of WHR fics. Yours are the only good ones. And when i say good I mean stay awake until 8 am in order to read it all good. Which i did. 8 43 am to be exact. I am so tired but all the same i must keep reading. ONWARD! Yay.
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Reviewed By: LisaKC On: May 25, 2006 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess I'm going to spend my evening with you and your wonderful stories!
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Reviewed By: hi On: March 03, 2006 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would realy LOVE it if you made a sequl. PLEASE MAKE ONE!
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Title: Life Awakenings
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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