| "Come back to me, come back to us" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Zofo On: January 05, 2008 19:06 CST
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Nooo Vegeta doesn't get to punish him, I was looking forward to that but hopefully they'll catch him again before he does too much damage. If what Goku suspects about Vegeta is the future patter of tiny feet, then Turlis could cause even more trouble (shivers at the possibilities). Nice punishment for the Counsel by the way, they deserved it.
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Reviewed By: ArchNemesis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 00:12 CST
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To Kahlan N, sorry about that. I just tried re-posting the chapter but it's not working. If you would like for me to send you the chapter please email me at shinigami_godeath@yahoo.com. And I will send it out to you asap. Thank you for letting me know. Sincerely, Nemesis ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kahlan N On: January 04, 2008 21:30 CST
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I would continue reading but Chapter 8 is cut off. "A slight smile appeared on Vegeta's face. The only who noticed it was 18. She was sitting a little closer to the prince and got an eye fully of the small swell of his tummy and saw how he was rubbing it in calm circular motions. "I'm guessing Vegeta that you're about 4" It ends there....
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Reviewed By: Zofo On: January 01, 2008 17:21 CST
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Sorry for my late review as I was re-reading it from scratch. Loving the story. I was worried that Turlis would match Vegeta and am so glad he didn't, don't think I could take them having to break their bond (is that even possible?). Looking forward to how Vegeta will punish him though. xxx
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