| "Stripper By Day, Gangsta By Night" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Like whoa!
Reviewed By: Serinity's angel On: June 24, 2007 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this along time ago! it was good, now I have to read the other chapters or scenes! Serinity's Angel ^_~
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Reviewed By: Twinny On: November 25, 2006 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it really suppose to be Kira? I thought it was Kisa
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Title: Dork
Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My parents are always on my case about the computer. IT's an all out battle between us. You take too long to update! *chibi MG waves arms franticly* Update sooner! Or I'll sick Shigure on you! >< Later -Manga Girl
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Reviewed By: Furubagirl2 On: August 26, 2006 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this stroy and maybe it may be my computer but why the hort ending. also um good luck with the dad thing bye.
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Title: GRR......
Reviewed By: Serinity [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 03:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
well, I'm really happy that you finally updated, but.... why did you make it so short. anyways, update quick please!!!!!
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: Serinity [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have very interesting logic. lovesit.
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Reviewed By: anglekitty13 On: July 13, 2006 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it!! pleasez update soon really i did love it
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Reviewed By: demonflame On: June 30, 2006 10:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dang it, write some more, and make the chapters longer, i've read Sunday comics that are longer!Just kidding, it's really good, but you do need to make them longer.
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Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 14:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
It needs some work... But it is intresting none the less. When I saw the title it freaked me out, but caught my attention... ^^ Try to make your chapters a little longer, people like longer stories, and slow down your pot, take things one at a time! It's a funny story, weird but funny.
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