| "The Path of Jealousy and Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: kikyo hater28 On: May 30, 2007 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you so much for accepting my review !!!!!!! not many people do yhis is a kind of cute fan fic update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: xAyameKaiousx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 00:35 CST
Comment/Review:
ITS SOOOOO GOOOD. I love it, I love how everything is spelled right everything is spaced and your choice of words, but please don't make it so InuYasha gets hurt I know that sounds bad, I'm Sess/Kag writer myself both my stories Memories dont die they scar and dreams of integrity are about them, but dont make it so its unfair where Kikyo dies or something...anyway of course its just a suggestion...lol I cannot wait for chapter 4 please update soon.-KaiousMoon
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Reviewed By: the demon luver On: February 26, 2006 19:20 CST
Comment/Review:
it is really good you should update soon
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 16:01 CST
Comment/Review:
please update soon!!! please make the chapters longer
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: RayGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!! BUT WHY SO SHORT?! UPDATE! I love this already. *begs* I'll pester you about it forever now! Oh, and btw, you can psot it on fanfiction.net You'll get way more reviews and visits there!
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