Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, so I see that you're a fan of Yukiru. Yun-chan and Tohru-kun do make an adorable couple, but they've lost a lot of fans because so many people think that Yun-chan is too "lovey dovey". Oh well. You should write more Furuba fanfics. You are very good at it. Argh, Yun-chan's mom is SOOOO evil! I wish she, Akito, Ren and Kyon-chan's dad would all just jump off a cliff. (Or better yet, they should all be locked up in the cat's room for the rest of their lives, instead of Kyon-chan) The chapter when she went to the parent-teacher conference was so sad, thankfully Aya came to the rescue! ^_^ I think it was a good idea to show what Yun-chan was doing the day before, I'm sure that he was pretty sad about it. And it mad an interseting fic too. ^_^
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