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| "The Deep End" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Thad_dereks On: November 10, 2006 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You can definetely write (i've seen your fics on AdultFan and loved them) but I was a little(more than that actually) disapointed when I opened this fic because it was aproximatly 13 paraghraphs long(and isn't even on Adultfan)... longer chapters, given the story has a plot of coarse, make for happy readers, otherwise it's just disapointing (in my opinion). Kind of like getting socks for christmas...
| Reviewed By: jou-kaiba-mokie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 18:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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