| "Love & Sadness (updated)" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: Its differant
Reviewed By: Neil Fitchner On: September 09, 2003 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is one of the most unique of the Pokemon fics on this site. Its written as if the characters are your best friends and you'll love reading about them when they're just hanging out with each other. They are real people who talk and act realisticly. The unusual style of writing is sometimes hard to read and the grammer and punctuation are far from perfect but that isn't important with work of this quality. Particularly enjoyable is the part where Mew gets turned into a human. I say to TR MEW write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Richard Green [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2002 02:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once I'd read it I quickly checked to make sure it wasn't called "Lust and Sadness." Be afriad for this is like a porn video with a story line wrapped around it. Still there are other aspects that I can make witty comments about so lets move on. The way the prose is written is graphic and in your face. If there's an explosion it won't say there's an explosion, it will say BANG! Although I've rated spelling and grammer with a 7, the punctuation makes the story hard to read. This may be just style however. Despite this its hugely entertaning and one of the most original stories or Team Rocket life I've ever read. I promise you that for all its faults you won't find it boring. |
