| "To Defy A God" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: hellsing342 On: December 27, 2007 19:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Schwelty, at least he/she tried to write a decent akito/tohru fic. If you like that pairing so much but didn't think this author's writing skills were good enough for your standards then why did you even bother to review? Actually, I'm wrong. That is not even a review, it is a FLAME. Honestly, if you can't say anything nice about this fic, then don't say anything AT ALL. Everyone else here managed to look past this author's writing skill and enjoy this fic, so if you have a problem with that and don't believe that this is how someone should write an akito/tohru fic, then why don't you go write one yourself?
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Reviewed By: schwelty On: May 29, 2007 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, is everybody on crack? While I like the idea of you writing about Tohru and Akito, your writing skills lack so much. Please DO NOT continue. So many grammar mistakes, and so many cheesy lines that have been used many times. Not orginal. Just stop. Now. Another hint, you may want to finish high school, or at least be at then end of it, when you want to continue writing. Then again, you may just be a crappy writer no matter what age you are. Anyway, stop reading manga and drawing fan art during your English class, and actually pay attention to what the teacher has to say! God, horrible fanfiction...
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Reviewed By: _luv_naraku_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job!! i really enjoyed it!! please update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: randomlessness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a nice story. *SPOILER* If only Akito was in fact a guy. It is revealed later on that 'he' is indeed a 'she'.
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: Tali Mi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say your a genius. She is changing him for the better I cant wait to read the next chapter
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Reviewed By: AnimeJunki07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totaly love your story. It's spontanious, and suspensful with just the right amount of angst...Can it be that Akito has a heart? Well the all powerful "god" will just have to make litte tohru fall in love with him huh? I didnt think that i would like an akito anf tohru pairing but you've made it interesting...cant wait for the next chapter. ~Jessie-chan~
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Reviewed By: catlover576 On: June 21, 2006 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor akitooooo and tohru!!! ;_; Oh well, good story hope you update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: XxhellzgurlxX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i liked it and i thought i wasnt cuz it was n akito/torhu fic i thought i was ganna hate it. PLEASE UPDATE!
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Title: whole story
Reviewed By: wildkyo On: June 13, 2006 09:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a very good read the akito and torhu pairing is wierd but good overall i hope u continue the fic
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Title: Wahh..Kawaii!!
Reviewed By: Sakura cherry123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOw very kawaii fic!! I really like Akito and Tohru pairing becuz it's like ur pairing an angel and a devil(no offence) and the angel gets to purify the devils soul and turns him into good!....uhhhh well anywayz Plsss UpdTate cuz I really like the fic!!!
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Reviewed By: kagsessdaughter Silver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 08:48 CDT
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Akito you jerk!!!!!!!!!!!! i wopuld kill you myself if i could how dare he touch little tohru she didnt do anything *sniffle* that baka
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Reviewed By: kanti89 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you describe things. Keep it up! i want to find out what happens next! I was on the edge of seat so come on! Hit us with the next chap. but take your time~ -Kanti
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Reviewed By: kristie On: March 26, 2006 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its so cool put more up please please please *does puppy dogs*
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Launya On: March 16, 2006 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love the story. I realllly wished that you would cotinue the story. I just wish and hope that you would keep continueuing the story. I kind of wished you would write on how the other zodic memerbers are taking on how Tohou is gone. That's pretty much it. I just like your writing and hope that you can keep writing and do your updates faster.
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Reviewed By: doujo (dlg) On: March 06, 2006 21:05 CST
Comment/Review:
hii ^^ it's a good story so far. Hope you'll update really soon!! =)
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