| "Memories and the moon" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: decemberangel16 On: August 30, 2009 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story. i can't wait to read more of it. plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: twinsnake1604 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good fanfic and i want to read more. Please update soon!
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 17:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh wow! I love your story! Keep up the good work. ^_^
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter please update soon.
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Title: totally write more
Reviewed By: kidkool8020 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! YOU SHOULD TOTALLY WRITE MORE! OH! CHECK OUT MY STORY! SAKURA,PRINCESS OF THE SOUTHERN LANDS! I NEED TO GET CHPTR@ OUT SOON SO REVEIW PLZ AND KEEP WRITING CAUSE YOU HAVE GREAT POTENCIAL!
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read chapters 3-5 and they were awsome. I cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: grammar_bitch On: February 25, 2006 15:36 CST
Comment/Review:
This story is much improved in its paragraph structure and in the ease of reading it on a computer screen. As a reader, I thank you for the changes, and I give you kudos for originality in the story plot. Good luck with the rest of your story and I hope you receive more reviews. :)
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chappies i love them. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: grammar_bitch On: February 20, 2006 19:33 CST
Comment/Review:
I see you have major grammar and paragraph structure issues. A new paragraph should be made every time a different person speaks, a new action takes place, a different person thinks something, the point of view changes, the scene changes, or time passes. More than one person should NEVER speak in the same paragraph. Pick up a paperback novel and look at the paragraph structure. Or go to a good fanfic writer's story and look at how they form their paragraphs. Here's a good example: http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/111225. Sueric uses correct grammar and paragraph structure. More people will read your story if you try and use correct grammar and space the paragraphs correctly. This is not a flame. I hope it helps you improve your story.
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story so far please update soon.
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