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| "Mysterious Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Omegakeptclose On: February 21, 2006 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the dialogue, no good story can be complete without dialogue. A bit long on it yes, but necessity usually plays a more pivitol role in a story then convience.
| Reviewed By: Omegakeptclose On: February 21, 2006 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the story. I felt it read very easily, and I enjoyed the constant flashbacks that synced up with the word play. It helped establish Midoriko's reasoning for doing a lot of what she did. Good prologue, I can't wait for the rest of it.
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