Reviewed By:rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2012 02:12 EST Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: awesome loved the way they came together the moonlight is powerfully
Title: Excellent Reviewed By:StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 12:46 EST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Your description and immagery combined with the song really made me picture the scene. As always you got Vegeta's character perfectly between his pride and his desire for Bulma, and captured their vulnerabilities as well as their strengths. Please keep writing!