| "Inescapable Grasp of Eva, Gather of the Children" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Inescapable Grasp of Eva, Gather of the Children"
Reviewed By: DARKANGEL 2.0 On: December 23, 2008 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plees hury with with next chapter p.s. neads MORE HENTI
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Reviewed By: scott austin On: November 24, 2008 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice cant wat 4 the next chapters you good
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Title: Anon
Reviewed By: Clouddancer1014 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 13:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continuw, I'd like to read more!
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Reviewed By: Clouddancer1014 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about the 8, but I did find some grammer messups. I only recently found your story, and I've enjoyed it so far. Please continue.
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Title: EVA-09
Reviewed By: EVA-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 04:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it seems like you are doing just nicely with your story, but the enjoyment factor is only seven, because I don't like it when there is new pilots that weren't in the series. The reason: Anyone of them might snatch Rei away from Shinji. But a good story so far. Waiting for more.
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