| "We Fall in Love All Over Again" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: wow
Reviewed By: hamzrox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it XD though the part where you said murdering you slowly...yea i sort of wanted to do that lol anyway can't wait for your next chapter
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Reviewed By: coorei On: April 30, 2007 06:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the plot of the story though i think it's a little bit too fast for Chikane and Himeko after they met at chapter 5. I really would have like it more if you dealt on both Chikane and Himeko's own life first before the meeting, it seems only himeko have a life and chikane just existed from the past and poof she came...it would have been better if both of their lives alone were shown, how they search for each other...i guess if the story will be like that it could stand alone even without the hijima conflict since at the end of the series it was said that the evil have already been vanished right? so its just a thought. But really i like the idea. ja-ne =) Handj
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Reviewed By: chickane X himeko On: June 17, 2006 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i want to read more chickane and himeko seen's!!!great story!!please update soon !!
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Title: That puppy...
Reviewed By: Issac of the Twilight On: June 01, 2006 18:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Is that the same puppy that got himiko and chikane together in the first place?...sweet!!!
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Reviewed By: xtina On: March 19, 2006 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this series!! and im excited to see what else you write. Pleas Update Soon!!
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Reviewed By: jeshika On: March 09, 2006 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, the worst part about this fic is, u stopped writing it! come on!!! she sees chikane for the first time but just have that kind of reaction?!.. do something! please!.. ur the only one that can do it lol, and it wouldn't hurt to write longer chapters :D..please?
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Reviewed By: xSojix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 05:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter... Update soon!!!
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