| "My Forbidden Story" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so nice please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 13:09 CST
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I vote that after there training........ she disapear's right before his eye's.... and ends up with her mother...... in the future.... insert shikon story.... then they meet again after the shikon is complete.... Update soon!
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Reviewed By: cool 2007 On: January 22, 2007 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plezzzzzzzz wright moreZ
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 03:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I hope you found your book *S*
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Title: meany!!
Reviewed By: loopy911 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so mean!!!! u better update soon or I'm going to be emotionaly scared for the rest of my life!!! not really but at this point I would say anything just to get u to update. that should show u how badly I want u to update!!! and I'm also reading ur other fan-fic and it's pissing me off u haven't updated that one ether!!! I'm starting to get depressed now that I realize out of 10 fan-fic's no one has updated in a month(or it just sseems that way, to me) now u can't tellme thats not depressing. Loopy911
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Reviewed By: bluemoon_175 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would love to see you write more, so update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 12:16 CDT
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Nicccceeeeee, I REALLY like this story... plzz update soon, and i vote for K/B... Idk y, but sometimes its just a little weird ... to me.... sometimes, when he goes out with 'Flames' sister... lol. I like da whole last name thing too, so they wouldn't take the last names of their parent unless they didn't want to right. One more thing, just wonering, what did 'Embers' brother want with her that she did... "I have no more use for you"... what did she do... or are you going to reveal it later... and her brother thinks that shes dead right? Just don't wanna get lost...lol. I really like it, I don't think I have seen a beginning like this before...lol
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover nlo On: June 29, 2006 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO! i like it! write more!
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Reviewed By: darkenedsoul On: June 08, 2006 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great startso far. cool idea on having demons choose their last names!
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Reviewed By: Shessy-luver On: June 03, 2006 17:19 CDT
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its good but is Kagome still going to have the shikon and what about the baster i mean Inuyasha heh..
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Title: good work so far
Reviewed By: hiei_kagome_4ever(not logging) On: May 31, 2006 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update very soon i just love this story so far
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Reviewed By: DragonoftheMikoFlame On: May 30, 2006 23:00 CDT
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its soooo cute...update!!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru's Kitty On: May 27, 2006 18:12 CDT
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Ok, I'm not rating because, well I'm not. Anyway, this is a good story, update as often as you can. And also, since you are obviously a Hiei/Kagome fan, do you know where I can find some good stories on those two? My e-mail adress is Mskittie14@aol.com
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 20:52 CDT
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i want to read, u know u can use regular wordpad rite?
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Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: hiei_kagome_youko_yusuke_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 20:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
please hurry up i want to see if it well be good
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