"My Forbidden Story" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blue Wolf Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 23:24 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please, please update soon. This is a very, very,very interesting fic.
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Reviewed By: jen9 On: June 18, 2007 19:11 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i realy like this please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: fluffy-chan 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 18:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is a great story so far please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 07:02 CDT Comment/Review: I can't wait to find out what more can happen to the two of them. after all it's not every day that you find a fic like this one where you at lest KNOW that the happniess will end for some reason, and I enjoy not knowing if it will ever come back to the two of them. Until next time, ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 07:02 CDT Comment/Review: I can't wait to find out what more can happen to the two of them. after all it's not every day that you find a fic like this one where you at lest KNOW that the happniess will end for some reason, and I enjoy not knowing if it will ever come back to the two of them. Until next time, ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: KagHieiLuver On: February 03, 2007 23:59 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: the ending was sooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 18:18 CST Comment/Review: Please update this story more than you usually do. I first read this a helluva long time ago and I kinda forgot about it.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 15:23 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is so nice please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 13:09 CST Comment/Review: I vote that after there training........ she disapear's right before his eye's.... and ends up with her mother...... in the future.... insert shikon story.... then they meet again after the shikon is complete.... Update soon!
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Reviewed By: cool 2007 On: January 22, 2007 18:48 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: plezzzzzzzz wright moreZ
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 03:31 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Well I hope you found your book *S*
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Title: meany!! Reviewed By: loopy911 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 21:18 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that was so mean!!!! u better update soon or I'm going to be emotionaly scared for the rest of my life!!! not really but at this point I would say anything just to get u to update. that should show u how badly I want u to update!!! and I'm also reading ur other fan-fic and it's pissing me off u haven't updated that one ether!!! I'm starting to get depressed now that I realize out of 10 fan-fic's no one has updated in a month(or it just sseems that way, to me) now u can't tellme thats not depressing. Loopy911
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Reviewed By: bluemoon_175 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 15:47 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I would love to see you write more, so update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 12:16 CDT Comment/Review: Nicccceeeeee, I REALLY like this story... plzz update soon, and i vote for K/B... Idk y, but sometimes its just a little weird ... to me.... sometimes, when he goes out with 'Flames' sister... lol. I like da whole last name thing too, so they wouldn't take the last names of their parent unless they didn't want to right. One more thing, just wonering, what did 'Embers' brother want with her that she did... "I have no more use for you"... what did she do... or are you going to reveal it later... and her brother thinks that shes dead right? Just don't wanna get lost...lol. I really like it, I don't think I have seen a beginning like this before...lol
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover nlo On: June 29, 2006 12:47 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: NOOOOO! i like it! write more!
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