| "The Art of Submission" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 18:29 CST
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I don't think that Inuyasha could bring himself to admit (on any level) gratitude for Naraku, even if it did do him good in the long run. ~~~~ There should be a new paragraph every time a new character speaks ~~~~ Why would Kagome stand by while they fought like that? If she was going to participate at all, she'd just tell Kouga that she wouldn't have him even if he won. ~~~~ She hopes she IS pregnant? That would be easier to believe if you'd set this story a few years later and made Kagome a little more thoughtful. ~~~~
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Reviewed By: AmonLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW I loved It !!!!!!! It was Nice , Alas I submit to No One NoONE *Boyfriends Hears on the Phone* "SO Is That Right Sweetheart ???" .........I am not so sure anymore .....>_< Damm Him and the Kinkiness in his Voice ,Er I read Your Fic to him we are on the Phone He Liked It !!!! So it has to be Good cause he doesnt even watch to Show and Like it Thanks For PostIng Many Kisses and Hot Bothered Dreams
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, I happy for them.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, I happy for them.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, I happy for them.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, I happy for them.
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Title: HOT!
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS AWESOME! Lurve it, its really a hot one-shot! U should continue it, totally. Nice Job on dis n hope u'll update! hehe
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