| "Tomaru's Story" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 00:49 CDT
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Please post what Kag reaction is going to be!! It will...well I don't know if explosive is the right word for what is going to happen. I'm hooked!
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 21:20 CDT
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yay, he finally fessed up! Please post kag's reaction soon - the suspense is killing me!
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Title: WoW
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 13:13 CDT
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This story is wonderful! Wow! I am cringing in fear to see what happens when Kagome finds out the truth. But then again she is rather dense on the subject isn't she. Keep it up I want to know the rest!
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Reviewed By: YUIR_RENEE79 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU HAD ME CRING IN THIS STORY AND IT WAS GREAT...CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW SHE ACTS WHEN THE TRUTH COMES OUT
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 06:43 CDT
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Great chapter! I really enjoy reading your work
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: April 29, 2006 06:35 CDT
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Cute, kawaii fluff! How's Kagome gonna take Tomaru being Sess's son? Oo, *squeaks* Can't wait to see what happens...!
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: April 28, 2006 07:51 CDT
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Ohhh-hoho! Another twist! You're good. Now is Rinny-Rin gonna tell Mama Kaogme what she heard? I'm so curious! *squeaks* Continue soon, not that you need to be told! ^o^!
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: April 27, 2006 20:57 CDT
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Whaaaat?! You're kidding! You're joking! *mouth gapes open and stutters* Whoa! That's a huge surprise!!!
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really interesting story, but when is Sesshoumaru going to tell Kags that the baby's his?
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: Midnight_EvE On: April 27, 2006 00:42 CDT
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the story is really interesting. I hope that you update soo. I would really like to see what happens next. :D
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 22:33 CDT
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Awww! Kagome's preggy! *flails* I'm so happy! She's probably not going to be, but I am! I hope Fluffy is too! I betcha he is! Whoo hoo! Update soon!
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Title: update
Reviewed By: yuni On: April 25, 2006 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww, poor Kagome. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: April 25, 2006 12:50 CDT
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What a twist! Wow! That seemed very consensual to me, by the way, in some strange way.. but it was so... wow, what a turn around. I guess Tomaru is coming now, huh? ^_^
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 14:15 CDT
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*smiles brightly* I really enjoy this. I like the new chapters a whole lot, I hope that everything goes well! *does the happy dance* :3!
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 00:44 CST
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Short chapters but frequent updates. I really like this story... and all this is a flashback? Interesting... I'd like to see where this goes
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