| "Tomaru's Story" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: cj On: November 03, 2006 10:23 CST
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WOW!!! This was VERY well done!! The scene where Inuyasha died the second time was really good, the emotions were great and although it didn't cause me to cry, it was almost as though I didn't have to...you got across all of the feelings that Inuyasha had and then you also managed to keep Sesshoumaru in character which is nearly IMPOSSIBLE most of the time...really good job!
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Reviewed By: Hanyoukagome962 (nsi) On: May 05, 2006 05:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww the ending was cute and funny. Lol Awsome job i really like this fic i think you should make a sequel it would be fun to read. Anyway i love this fic and i enjoyed reading it.
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Title: Epilogue-Tomaru's Story
Reviewed By: YURI_RENEE79 On: May 05, 2006 05:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY I JUST LOVE THE END....I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT XTORY WITH THESE TWO
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Title: Epilogue-Tomaru's Story
Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a beautifully written story; witty, engaging and entertaining. The characters were well written and well developed, the plot was unique and intriguing, and I thoroughly enjoyed following it to the lovely Epilogue just posted. Thank you so much for some wonderfully diverting reading! :) ~~Wiccan~~
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: May 04, 2006 23:33 CDT
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That was so funny!! That was so cute! And my goodness, Kagome's popping out babies left and right! Five kids? Whew! She gets a work out! Sess keeps her busy indeed... what a happy story ^_^
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Reviewed By: Cyndi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 15:33 CDT
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Aw that was such a wonderful story. Tomaru sounds so cute ^^ I loved the character interaction through out all the good and the bad. It's hard to keep Sesshoumaru IC and you did a pretty good job. Thumbs up to you! :D
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 23:26 CDT
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*squeals* ZOMG! THAT WAS AWEOSME! I LOVED IT! AAAAH! *does super happy dance* I really did! Congrats on a great fic, you really deserve it! *wipes at my tears* Now let me go cry in a corner for the happiness!! Lol!
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Title: Loving IT!!!
Reviewed By: foefwe On: May 01, 2006 23:23 CDT
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NOOOOO!!!!Its getting eben more interesting!! Pleasae update soon!!!! I would really really really like to see whats going to happen next. I cant wait. ciao. :D
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: May 01, 2006 20:04 CDT
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That was... actually kind of funny. The conversation with herself. But, other than that, that was cool. I'm so happy she came around! ^o^
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: May 01, 2006 12:32 CDT
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Holy crap! You can't... you stopped there?! *squeaks* Ahh! What's gonna happen?! Is Kagome gonna get mad? Oh no! :x! I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 00:49 CDT
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Please post what Kag reaction is going to be!! It will...well I don't know if explosive is the right word for what is going to happen. I'm hooked!
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 21:20 CDT
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yay, he finally fessed up! Please post kag's reaction soon - the suspense is killing me!
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Title: WoW
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 13:13 CDT
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This story is wonderful! Wow! I am cringing in fear to see what happens when Kagome finds out the truth. But then again she is rather dense on the subject isn't she. Keep it up I want to know the rest!
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Reviewed By: YUIR_RENEE79 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU HAD ME CRING IN THIS STORY AND IT WAS GREAT...CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW SHE ACTS WHEN THE TRUTH COMES OUT
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 06:43 CDT
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Great chapter! I really enjoy reading your work
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