| "The Hidden Continent" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: hollycathers [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2011 07:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The way in which the author tied Naruto and Yu Yu Hakusho together is very refreshing, there's no jarring feeling; the joint is seamless and story very original. There are many interesting elements to this story (youko vs Kyubi, Makai vs the continent). I agree with a previous review about power ratings made clear; that would improve the union of the two. The style in which it is delivered is very mature and pulls readers into the plot. However, it seems a shame to stop reading after a couple of chapters, for this story has a lot of potential. I very much look forward to a continuation and the rest of your work. Thank you for presenting us your stories. |
Reviewed By: Ceer Uchiwa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 08:08 EST
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haha! Kyubi is a right ol' perv! Love it! And poor Kurama... having to deal with Hiei being 'marked' by the Kyubi, priceless. I realy enjoy reading this story so please continue!
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Reviewed By: Miststalker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 13:54 EST
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Please update I found this story intrigueing and I want to know how it ends.
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Title: Niiro
Reviewed By: mikai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 18:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter! I tried to review sooner, but for some reason I couldn't. I was logged in, and everything! Anyhow, wonderful chapter! I love Kurama's reaction to Hiei telling him of Kyuubi!! Hilarious. Updats ASAP!! I want to see what happens next!!!
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 13:01 EDT
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No demons that human looking? Are they in for a big surprise. -wolf grin- I can't wait for them to meet Yusuke, if they do. Wait wait, I can't wait for them to meet Kurama. Youko is going to have a bitch fit when he finds Naruto again. Touching Hiei like that...-snicker- Anyway. This is good, I am intreagued that there is a 'contanent' in the Makai that no one has ever found before. It is just believeable. I know how big the things in Makai could get to so I am not all that concerned about how big that damned lake would have to be for that contanent to fit in there. I do have one question, what is Yusuke going to do about Kakashi? It seems weird, putting them two together. There is also the question that has been nagging at me. How is Naruto going to act when he finds out that there is someone like him, but the Kitsune was willing to go into the human body, and not forced. Mhmmm....There is also the thing with the chakura VS Spirit/Demon energy. Kurama, Hiei and Yusuke are all close to 'S' class I know, and that makes me very strong. But how strong are they in comparason to Jairya(Sp?) or Itachi per say? Alot of writers that do Crossovers find it hard to compare power level, and so I was thinking you could give it a shot to make your story better. This is a great read, thanks for writing it! Ja!
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Reviewed By: Wizardess Gal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 00:20 EDT
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Hmm, hmm. Sounds interesting. I find myself wondering if there's any chance of continuation? After all, it's been months...not that I'm in any posision to scold.
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Reviewed By: NekoKaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 06:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story. You've got some interesting concepts, and I like your style. Full 10's across the board. Can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 21:25 EST
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Another wonderful chapter! Now poor Kakashi's going to get the shock of his life!
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 09:29 EST
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...Wow...I remember reading this, and I could have sworn that I had reviewed, but obviously not. This is a good story, a little big lacking on the detail of the people. I am assuming that is because you expect the people to know what everyone looks like before they click on the link that leads to your story. However, I do think a small bit of detail would work in your favor. The idea of the HieixNaruto/Kyuubi pairing you left us with at the end of your first chapter is an interesting idea to say the least. I'm eager for the next chapter so that we know what will happen to the lustful thing named Kyuubi. Please keep writing! Ja!
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Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 07:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, i absolutely loved the first chapter of this, please you have got to update a.s.a.p. I cant wait to see what happens next. Please update soon and keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 18:10 EST
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Oooh. I'm really excited. Hiei in Naruto world. Now that's definitely got to be worth a laugh or two. I thought it was hilarious how Hiei dispatched of Ochimaru so easily. And he thought the snake was nothing more than something that wasted his time. Ha, ha. Way cool!
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