| "Wallflower" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: orangeflips [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 12:56 CDT
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Although I'm not terribly fond of the Goth-Wufei idea, I like this ficlet. It's cleverly written, and I'm an absolutely sucker for Wufei-centrics, haha. (: 1x5, perhaps? Although 2x5 is great too... hahaha, update, darling!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 11:13 CDT
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*sighs in relief* no 4x5. no that the pairing's bad or anything. ummmm......who is wuffers gonna be paired with? i like how duo's getting along with him. heero's kinda being....creepy. oh well, update!!!!
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Title: wallflower
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting! It looks like even though everyone has finally realized that Wufei is indeed a boy that they still want him! Ha Ha! I loved the conversation with his Daddy in class it was just too cute and how he deliberately ignored Meiran even though we know that he heard her. I can't wait to see how lunch is going to turn out. Let the games begin! Also I can't wait to see Wufei correct one of the students about not messing with him because you can already see it coming! Looking forward to reading the next update soon and nice chapter.
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Didn't feel like logging in On: March 10, 2006 21:33 CST
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Hee Hee. This is getting to be extremely entertaining. I can't wait until I get to read what goes on at wherever it is Wufei wants to go. Update soon, 'kay? P.S. This is Sakag.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 10:35 CST
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wufei is so wonderfully dark and sexy in this fic. keep going! i like how you write by the way. where's my dancing sprite thingy? lol. UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wuwu sounds like a very delicious hottie in this one. I want to read more!
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Title: Wallflower
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an interesting story that you have here and I am glad that I took the time to read it. I am enjoying your characterization of Wufei so far and I can't wait to see how he is going to adjust to his new school. I also like watching him interact in a family setting. I think that it is shaping up great so far so keep up the good work. I am really looking forward to reading the upcoming chapters and it will interesting to see when everyone does realize that Wufei is indeed a boy and "not" a girl.
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Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Glad to see you've updated, however even though i feel bad saying it, because i couldn't write a story to save my life; your second chapter has too much happening internally and externally, mayb it would be better for wufei to meet the guys not all at the same time but over a time period, because the description of wufei that I got from the prologue, I don't think he would be as welcoming as he is right now and to so many people at one time.And the school day seems to drag on too long especially that lunch break. But keep writing because you have something here.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 10:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wu wu is soooooo scary. i like him!! continue please, this is really interesting.
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Title: What's going on???
Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 23:32 CST
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Do u know u posted chapter 1 twice? so chap 2 is really chap 1 all over again. I could not really follow chapter one because there were way too many spelling errors , so that disrupted the flow.I think that the pace of the story is going way too fast compared to the prologue.It's like too much happening to soon. There is not much to look forward because of this. And I beg of u, no 1x2x3x4x5 please. :(
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Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well well well what do we have here. A very interesting start. I'm loving ur depiction of wufei and the situation at hand. I hope u will continue writing and give hints of possible pairings too. I love wuffers.Keep writing.Keep updating.
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