| "Who is the Greatest Thief?" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: I liked it. :D
Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol these were my two fav lines: "'Cause you're the leader. I'm the joker, and Kora's the annoying conscience that angsts when we don't listen to her." "And then she'd come armed to the teeth to rescue you," Dark muttered. The vase idea was really kool. Great chapter, I like it! I can't wait to read more! :P
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Title: Great, as usual. ^_^
Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol I liked these two lines the best: "Just let me club him on the head!" from Ginryu or Dark. "Can't we just leave him?" Dark asked. "If we push him into the broom closet and seal it up, I'm sure no one will notice." Nice work, I liked it!
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Title: Great chapter! :D
Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Oh, you're exaggerating! They'll just dispel a lot of smoke. . .which will turn anyone nearby pink." Lol original idea, I liked it! Great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens now that Krad, Dark, Satoshi, and Daisuke are separated! :P
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Reviewed By: Miheran On: December 01, 2007 23:54 CST
Comment/Review:
great story, can't wait till the next chapter....exspeically what happens next
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Reviewed By: Twinny On: January 04, 2007 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! please update more offen...it is such a good story!!
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Title: Awesome story.
Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is totally original. You describe everything so well, I can picture it all eprfectly! :D Plz write more asap!
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Reviewed By: 2SEXY4U On: August 22, 2006 07:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!! ppl r lucky they get 2 meet Dark..........i wanna meet Dark........ :( hehe well u have a great plotline u just keep doing what ur doing and u'll be fine ^^ YAY 4 FANFICTIONS!!!!!!!!!!WOOTWOOT!!!!!!!!!!! --' i'm a nerd...................oh well update soon!!!!!
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Title: Awesome story!
Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
u r rlly creative! ur ideas r totally original! :D
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Title: COOOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: 2SEXY4U On: July 02, 2006 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome!!!!!!! u did great!!!!!! i realy like ur story update soon ok?!!!! ^~
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Reviewed By: Gaby-chan On: June 29, 2006 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That fic was great please please continue please!?^-^
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Reviewed By: kagomeme2000(notsignedin) On: June 22, 2006 18:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
love it update soon...
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Reviewed By: kagomeme2000(notsignedin) On: June 03, 2006 08:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
love it thanks for updating....oh is satoshi going to turn krad soon?
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Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 14:53 CST
Comment/Review:
*claps* Lovely! Nothing like competition to improve your game.
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