| "captured" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Horrible Spelling
Reviewed By: Catie1201 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 06:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry but I couldn't even read it because of your lack of spelling and grammar. I'm not sure if English is your first language or not...but needless to say this stoy was bad.
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting so far, please give an update...
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Reviewed By: guyanagal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 20:52 CST
Comment/Review:
this story is geting very interesting please!!!! write more
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Reviewed By: Gardian [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.
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Reviewed By: alexandraite [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 03:00 CST
Comment/Review:
First off, I want to tell you that your story has potential. I haven't read many B/V 'slave' fics (even though I've been told there are many) so this is different to me. Don't worry about setting us up for the B/V of it, take your time to let their story unfold. You might want to search out a beta reader for your story as I saw some spelling/syntax errors and a few inconsitencies. But, keep writing! I read it all and want to see where this goes. Take your time and let the story have your voice! Good luck!
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