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"Twilight" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ]
 Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 10, 2006 04:23 CDT
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Your story has won First Place for Best Angst Fiction from the Feudal Association. Your award can be found here - http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/april2006awards/Best_Angst_Ficti on_1st.jpg The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/
 Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: tootalltygerlily [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 04, 2006 01:30 CDT
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Congratulations, your story has been nominated for "Best Angst Fiction" at the Feudal Association. Voting will be held through May 1st, 2006 and winners will be notified shortly thereafter. Feel free to join our group and/or help us spread the word about our group! The official website for the group - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The yahoo group where nomination/voting takes place - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ If you have any questions, feel free to email Dark Avenger (the owner) at inuyashasbytch@gmail.com
 Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 29, 2006 13:35 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awesome idea! never would have thought of this one, but damn if it isn't the best one-shot i've read in a while. actually, is this going to stay as a one-shot, or no? i love it either way and thought the issue of rin's undying devotion towards sess brought the perfect amount of angst into it. poor shiori. but it could be worse. her loving rin, and sess romping with rin instead of her. ahhh. sess says such mean things!
 Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 21, 2006 21:40 CST
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That was great! Poor Shiori has to take what she's dealt, and I could think of much worse things than being Sesshoumaru's concubine/sex outlet. I really liked the unrequited attraction Shiori feels for Rin - it makes for a really great dynamic. I could see Sesshoumaru choosing to relieve his tensions with Shiori instead of Rin - even though she's hanyou, it's not as bad as laying with a human... and Shiori has more of a chance of being barren because of her mixed blood. She's the almost-perfect lay! And expendable to boot! Sorry it took me so long to read it. Oh! And there's some sort of error that made the majority of the story in italics. I'm assuming it's an error, anyway..
 Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 23, 2006 19:00 CST
Comment/Review:
This was a very interesting fanfic. I never would have thought of this pairing but I find that I actually like it! You may want to do a story with these two perhaps set after Naraku is destroyed. Anyway, good job!!
 Reviewed By: Cyndi [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 23, 2006 14:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, it's so bitter and real. I loved the character interactions.
 Reviewed By: Laurell-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 22, 2006 23:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed that! I loved the Rin and Shiori pairing, how it was based off sweet intentions yet had this deeper sexy possessive nature. And the characters were very well written. Sesshomaru's feelings towards Shiori were described in an accurate way to his nature I think. It looks like this is going to be a one shot and is great as is, I'd love to read more in the future if you ever decided to continue it though. Thanks for great reading!

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