| "Far From a Fairytale" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Raman man's review
Reviewed By: black18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Raman man won't beable to use his computer for a while because he got in trouble with his parents I Printed the lastest chapter for him to read and here's his review. THIS STUFF IS AWESOME SHE(meaning you) MUST UPDATE ASAP. I LOVE HER (you again) story!!! He is just way too loud.
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Reviewed By: black18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 06:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! I know it's been awhile but Raman man forgot to tell me you had two new chapter's. (incase your wondering Ranman man is a good friend of mine. He lives about 20 blocks from my house.) Your first new one was deep and I really loved the last new one you did. I can tell that your a natrual when it comes to poetry. update soon and keep up the good work! OH! and before I forget, I didn't know that their were more Albel and Sophia fics! but I do now!!
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Reviewed By: Raman man On: July 29, 2006 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALRIGHT!!!! KEEP UPDATING!!!! THIS CHAPTER WAS DEEP, AND I MEAN DEEP! I agree with BATTLE KING You are a genius!!!
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Reviewed By: BATTLE KING On: July 29, 2006 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!! Thanks for the heads up!! I didn't know there were more pairings on Albel & Sophia!!! Oh before I forget your new chapter was great!!! it was short but real deep!! Your descrition on Fyth's depression was awsome I could feel his sadness and I was only reading!! Your a genius!!! Update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: black18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a cool pairing. I didn't think Albel would attract someone like Sophia. UPDATE THIS IS GREAT!!!!
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Reviewed By: Raman man On: July 25, 2006 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope This is not the end of this!?!?! COME ON!!!! UPDATE THIS IS WAY TO GOOD TO END LIKE THIS!!!!
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Reviewed By: BATTLE KING On: July 25, 2006 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally some-one was able to melt Albel's cold heart!!! This is A rare pairing that I thought would never happen!! Update soon!!!
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