| "Forbidden Fruit" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: pinkmoonusagi513 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 13:42 EDT
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Hey! I just read the note on your profile. I am sorry that your life has been hard recently, but I am glad that you are trying to get back to writing! Just take your time and do what you gotta do, and I look forward to the next chapter whenever it is done.
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Reviewed By: Chibi InuKag On: March 14, 2007 18:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, this is a very interesting fanfiction. I've been reading fanfiction for quite some time, (>.>...
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 12:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this so much, I've gone back to rereading the previous chapters. Love the cliffy there, with him standing there and her nakki, then they lock eyes, lol. Great story, update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: pinkmoonusagi513 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 03:05 EST
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I love love love this story! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: WanderingAnariel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 09:54 EST
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Love this story! I can't wait till the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 11:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am throughly impressed! I happen to love this era. But regency romances in the fan fic world are not only hard to find but usually they are not properly done. The few that I did fins that were good are left undone. Please don't leave your story undone! You even took the time to write the dialouge correctly! I thought I would die from happiness when I read the word 'farse' instead of 'false'. Okay you most assurdily have the setting, terms, and such that you need for this story down. The character profiles seem to fit. It's an AU so I don't expect everyone to be exactly in character. I see you made Naraku human, that was an interesting twist. I am happy you did something with Sota. I was worried when you mentioned him but we never saw him. Your explaination of why he is seemingly never there was good. I wonder why he hasn't been putting money on the side so he can leave. Ture the house is their's but since Kagome is no longer there he doesn't have to worry about her. Men have a bit less to worry about. I'm sure that he is old enough to strike out on his own. And his sister married the head of the other villiage. He is used to hard work so finding a job should not be a problem. Well I would comment on the other characters but they seem to be fine as they are. No complanits, no suggestions. I will just sit back and watch. I have a few ideas as to what I want to happen but it's not my story so I will make silent predictions instead. I eagerly a wait the next chapter. You chapter lenghts have been fine. (noticed you commented on it so I did too.) Sorry for an errors in here. I'm in a bit of a rush so I can't go back and check. I do wonder why Kagome seems to still fear him and not the other demons. I mean he is only half to begin with and he hasn't done anything bad to her. I realize that a few sweet words will not make her instantly over her fear but the bonus is he hates her uncle too. Isn't that worth trusting him a little? And that cliffy? Well I see either him acting nonchalant or her jumping to the conclusion that he is going to "take her" and that he is with in his rights. Can't wait to see the outcome!
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Title: I LOVED IT!!!!
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89*not logged in* On: December 01, 2006 17:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is great so far!!! I LOVE it!!! Please update soon! =^^=
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Title: Tee Hee!
Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 23:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And of course...I would happen to read up to where the most angsty part is...their eyes lock and she is butt naked...aaaahhhh!! Lawd, can you say sexually fustrating??lol. I love the story. Thanks for writing it.
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Reviewed By: xaznpurity [nsi] On: November 29, 2006 23:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story =] please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Demons_Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 21:38 EST
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Spiffy. Wow, I haven't used that word in a reveiw...but that is what this story strikes me as, spiffy. Creative plot line and unlike anything I have ever read. w00t!!! Go spiffness! -lol insane randomness from Shadow
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Reviewed By: amhor56 On: November 29, 2006 20:34 EST
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Geez! i can't believe you! AHH! Cliffy! Dear God! I love your story and I need you to update as soon as humaly possible. I love the plot; it's genius. And I feel bad for Inuyasha because he loves Kagome so much and she is scared of him. Hopefully it will pass soon though. Well pleae update soon! Thanks
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 16:27 EST
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O_________________O YOU WHORE! HOW DARE YOU LEAVE A CLIFFY LIKE THAT!? HOW DAREYOU! I HATE YOU! But please update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 14:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was a lovely chapter. It still pains me to see that Kagome is adjusting to every youkai except Inuyasha ;( Poor Inu he loves her so much. The gates of hell are opening for you for leaving us with that cliffie, good lords! Great work! I look forward to your next update as always.
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Reviewed By: Anninat On: November 29, 2006 12:25 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I'm really liking this story. I love the plotline and the way you describe Kagome's feelings. That last chapter was great and I will be waiting on the edge of my seat for your next update!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 09:06 EST
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Oh Inuyasha.. you are in trouble. I love iut, update soon!
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