| "Forbidden Fruit" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 23:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH, this is definitely a keeper! I have never read anything like this one before. You had me hooked with the first chapter. After the second, heh, I was hard pressed for a third. But will just have to wait, I guess. Cant wait to see where this goes next. I like the mix you have, as you put it, very English based and Japanese. I think its different and refreshing. And I go fic hunting all the time, how I missed this, I have no idea. This is great. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Charm16 On: March 28, 2006 18:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fanfic! Please update soon! You have a great story going here.
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Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 01:05 EST
Comment/Review:
Aw crap, secret identity things make me mad-I still like the story though! Kags needs to kick some Kouga ass! Woot! Update!
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Reviewed By: GREAT STORY On: March 12, 2006 17:12 EST
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ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS UPDATE MORE! a lot more! keep going !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: March 12, 2006 15:37 EST
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i really like this story. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kelle917 On: March 12, 2006 12:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter...Actually brought me to some tears at the fact that Inu never got to say goodbye to Kagome...and then how she responded when she saw him in hanyou form...Sad yet wonderful! Keep writing!!!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 00:10 EST
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Not disapointing at all. I loved it, only thing is I feel bad for Inu at Kagome's reactions to him when he appeared as his hanyou self, although like he said earlier 10 years is a long time and his hair and ears were not shown, so how much could she know? Oh well...lol. Can't wait for more, update soon!!
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Reviewed By: mikogoddess On: March 04, 2006 22:59 EST
Comment/Review:
please update!!!asap
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Reviewed By: kelle917 On: February 26, 2006 22:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...plz. continue...it's a very good story
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Reviewed By: Inuobsession911 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 17:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice work, very original. keep it up!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 20:17 EST
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Love your story so far. Can't wait to read more, update soon! Thanks.
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Reviewed By: selina On: February 24, 2006 02:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow good story. i really really like it so i hope u update soon. love selina
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Reviewed By: evil6fairie6echo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 23:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I loved your style of writing and now I'm now I'm in suspense of how this story will continue. I absolutely loved it. Very creative! Keep writing! *puppy dog face* Pwease?
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 17:05 EST
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Good story, enjoying it muchly. just a few confusions with it. You mention American colonies, so makes me think its in England maybe, but then Inuyasha's human persona name is Japanese through and through. So I'm confused. Where is this taking place? I like how you are using the characters and look forward to the update!
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Title: Lovely!
Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 16:03 EST
Comment/Review:
Aww sweet first one to comment! I love the setup of this story! It's really neat! I hope you update soon. I'm interested! I loved the beginning!
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