| "Forbidden Fruit" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: ulri On: July 03, 2006 05:55 EDT
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Updateupdateupdateupdate!!! :D Love your story!!
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Reviewed By: Rinlover(offline) On: June 28, 2006 23:42 EDT
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FANTASTIC STORY! Very well written. Looks almost professionally written. Great story line, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Im ur BunnY [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 16:46 EDT
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That was a very intresting story. I really like how you made it in old fashion. Inuyasha is very dashing as a gentleman! I hope you update soon! _Jhonny_
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Reviewed By: ulri On: June 24, 2006 12:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really like this story, please continue!! A lovely mixture of Jane Austen and Inuyasha :D
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Reviewed By: Bre`Auna On: June 22, 2006 14:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool AWSOME. Pleas update soon 'Tanaga Mannie_bre'
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Reviewed By: sogi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 13:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story~ I've seen a lot of AU Inuyasha fics attempting Medieval/Victorian Britain but this is the only one I've read with such clear and fluid writing! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582 (not signed in) On: June 17, 2006 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story kicks so much ass!!! Naraku needs to die a terrible terrible death. Give him to Nina Hiena (from "Who Framed Roger Rabbit") .. I watched that today... please oh please oh pleas oh PLEASE add more chapters! *huge grin* thanks. Leanne
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Title: Well, I'll be!
Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 18:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks like a very promising plot line dear, and I'm glad you picked it up when it buzzed in your bonnet. It's ok to set it in Brittain - this is an AU after all, and there have been a variety of settings that have stolen our inu-tachy and dressed them in breaches, golf-court shoes and even reed-skirts (Miroku is exceptionally good looking in the last one *chuckles* ___________________ Also, I find that Naraku and Kouga being slimy together fits in very well with your plot line, and with his possessive attitude, the wolf could well fall into this behaviour if he'd been brought up in an environment that spoint him. Perhaps, I think that Inuyasha might have to exact a little of his power on Naraku, although 'buying' Kagome would make some interesting dynamics for a hostile-yet-attracted relationship. There's also the fact to consider that since Naraku falls under Inuyasha's power, a word, and the man is disowned of all his fortune... of course I'm sure Inuuyasha would try to do it legally or not at all... but Kouga revoking his claim makes for nice and interesting opened windows. __________________ I'll be sure to continue reading this, and have already put it on favourites. You have a very good immaginative streak and narrative vein dear, so don't give it up!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Yashie On: June 02, 2006 13:31 EDT
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i love this story its so great i just love reading it i do hope that you update soon so i can read the next chapter. i read your story a long time ago and totally forgot about it 'cause you took so loong in updating but now i remember so please do update soon.
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 22:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! Naraku needs to die... BEAUTIFUL language. I can't help but think of EverAfter or something along those lines and time period. WONDERFUL story! Please continue it!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: June 01, 2006 20:14 EDT
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yay another chapter! i hope kagome gets over her fear
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Title: Excellent!!!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 17:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. In a way I was surprised to see Koga give up so quickly, but if Naraku is aimed at selling Kagome I wonder just how Kane/InuYasha will take to that news. Should be interesting to say the least. Cant wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Selenide88 On: June 01, 2006 16:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Impressive!!! I just found your story this morning and I must say, I've enjoyed what you've written so far! Extraordinary work, I can't wait to see where this story leads! Keep up the amazing work!! Take it easy!! :D
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: June 01, 2006 16:22 EDT
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It's pleasing to see an update, and the quality of the chapter is superb. I love the story and really want to see what hapens with Miroku entering the picture. He always livens things up with his hentai attempts.
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin(offline) On: June 01, 2006 15:41 EDT
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I really like the way the story is going. I hope Inuyasha can tell her the truth soon. Good luck as you continue!
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