| "Forbidden Fruit" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: blue_girl On: July 18, 2006 21:45 EDT
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hey, luv ur story! my only question would go to the July 18th chapter. plz, if u would be so kind as to tell why there was a wedding ceremony when the two had just signed a wedding certificate moments before. according to what ive learned, signing a wedding certificate legalizes u as married, so there is no need for a ceremony. im seriously just wondering why u put it in there. keep up the good work though, i look forward to your updates!
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Title: O.M.K.!!!
Reviewed By: Kiki33 On: July 18, 2006 19:30 EDT
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Wow!!! I love your story, it's so great! Plz update soon. I'm dying to what's gonna happen to Kags. Your a really great author. When are you gonna put a lemon? I think it should be with Kags and Inu yasha in his demon form!!! Inu yasha is soooo hot! Anyways love the story, keep it up. U Rock, Kiki33
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Reviewed By: medli [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 16:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. now that was an update. too bad there isn't another one following. i would like to see how inuyasha reacts around kagome now or even if he will explain that he is kane. anyways, great job. certainlly love this story. it is something different, something good.
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 15:04 EDT
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This story is so awesome! Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: adamilej On: July 18, 2006 12:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter!!! very well written,
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 05:11 EDT
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Nice touch with the thoughts. The thing I remember most about my wedding is that all I could hear is a loud ringing in my ears. I was lip reading the preacher, which I don't do very well, and hoping I said "I do" in the right place. Is InuYasha going to remind her that she and he were once good friends? That they used to play together as children? Inquireing minds want to know
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Title: YAY! for quick updates!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 03:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was wondering if that's what was going to happen. Liked too, how ya slipped Myoga in there, lol. Liked the wedding vows and their own little thoughts here and there. Now, what matters is it that Lord InuYasha has to attend to I wonder...interesting. I cant wait to see Naraku get his cuz poor Sota is left to deal with alone now. Great chapter, but update when you can.
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 02:52 EDT
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I figured something like that would happen and I'm glad it did! Hopefully Kagome's sadness will melt away and her and Inuyasha can get to know each other better! Great chapter, can't wait for more, update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582(not signed in) On: July 16, 2006 13:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cries uncontrollably* you left it there!? you meany! *sobs* I really hope you don't do this.. but I just got this weird idea that kagome could be so distraught about being sold on the block and "betrayed" by Kane that she kills herself.. but that would just suck.. so maybe she's about to and Kane or Inuyasha or even Souta stop her? Also I can't help but think that she should have just stayed at Inu'... if bastard (Naraku) couldn't find her than he couldn't sell her and therefore inu-chan would have his head *smiles* Anyway, awesome work! keep it up!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 18:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Loved it how Kagome met Miroku. Then Sango. You really put things together well here. Now just need to see what comes on the morrow. Update when you can, :D
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Title: love it!!
Reviewed By: adamilej On: July 14, 2006 23:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it is so original and very well written. thanks
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Reviewed By: Aylese1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 21:55 EDT
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I'm looking foward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 18:14 EDT
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Very nicely done and written. Am I right in guessing that Inuyasha will buy her from the auction block? Though I am rather confused how she could not recognize him - she has already seen that he is a hanyou and the silver hair and amber eyes shoudl be a dead give-away, not the mention the name. She calls him 'Inu', right? So, when is Inuyasha going to show his true face to her? Please update soon, I'd love to read more - you've got me hooked.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 14:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I found this story because it was nominated for an award. I definitely see why. It's excellent! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I think I have some idea whats going to happen, and I really hope I'm right. But, even if Inuyasha succeeds in saving her on the auction block, it's gonna be hell to pay when Kagome puts it all together, LOL. The plot here is wonderful. I will definitely be watching for future updates. Good job!
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Reviewed By: cm On: July 14, 2006 03:29 EDT
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why the hell did Inuyasha do that? If he kept her hidden for those two days then he'd be able to get rid of naraku for good. Now he's sending her back and giving Naraku just what he needs to keep being selfish. BETTER HAVE A DAMN GOOD EXPLANATION FOR THIS!!! Update soon.
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