| "Confrontation" Reviews/Comments [ 107 ] |
| Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 › » ] |
Reviewed By: shaeshae On: July 03, 2006 15:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really great story and I can't wait for you to update ,the villian in this story is totally orignal and I like cuz it's somthing new this story is a lot of fun and it deserves a 10\10 ten out of ten
|
Title: critical eye
Reviewed By: critical eye [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 19:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
Good fic but I wished you had Sesshoumaru paired with Kagura and not with Rin. Rin was six years old as she met Sesshoumaru that would make her only nine in your story. Personally I don´t think Sesshoumaru should be paired with a human if you don´t want to make him seem OOC and he is OOC in your story; guess you can´t avoid that with this pairing. Personally I don´t pair him with Rin at all; you don´t raise a child to fuck it later, that´s just disgusting. Please don´t take this as a flame, just my own opinion. Actually I think your fic is very original, please keep on.
|
Reviewed By: XSesshomaruX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 22:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yup, number one fan here, since day 1, just need getting help off these cliffs
|
Reviewed By: BIG PIMPIN MONEY CASH On: June 29, 2006 14:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh...my....GOD....U ARE STARING TO TURN ME ON WITH A SEXY SEXY SEXY VESION OF KAGOME OMG JUST STOP UR MAKING EVEN JOYOKU UNABLE TO RESIST THE SEXY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODNESS OF KAGOME HE CANT TAKE IT HES GONNA EXPLODE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: kittycat925 (not logged in) On: June 28, 2006 22:27 EDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome, with what he's done to her. I hope Sesshy can get in there before anything we all regret happens. Update soon!
|
Reviewed By: chanda *nsi* On: June 28, 2006 20:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What!!!! Oh man so cruel, loved the update, look forward until the next. Chanda
|
Reviewed By: Corr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 19:19 EDT
Comment/Review:
|
Title: Very nice buh chapter 41?
Reviewed By: Corr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 19:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey.. i really enjoy yr story... itz very unique and creative... plz update soon and y isn't chap 41 workin.. i onli see a few lines and den it endz when it actually says dat the chapter is 7 pages.. so plz check on dat.. otha den dat.. i rush thru my work so i can read what you wrote.. plz update soon and faster... aite.. ez.. great job! *Corr*
|
Reviewed By: Deidra On: June 24, 2006 03:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy this story very much, keep the good work up, please. :P
|
Title: AAARRRGGG!!! A cliffy!
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 16:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
NO....NOOO!!!! That was a horriable/wonderful cliffy! Why? Your story is so beautiful and origanal. But you leave people like me on a cliff, please update soon because the suspense is killing me. Your story inspires so manydiff. endings I hope you save KAgome from that monster in the end. But then again I do love angst in stories I read. Update soon I am hooked!
|
Reviewed By: chanda *nsi* On: June 21, 2006 15:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey loved the update, nice cliffy as well. Oh, I do hope you update soon, the suspense is killing me. Chanda
|
Reviewed By: kittycat925 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 15:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
No! She can't do this, this can't happen this way... That was a good update, just kept my attention the whole time, and I have to see what happens next!
|
Reviewed By: kittycat925 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 23:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
I wonder what Jouyoku has planned...must be something like trading Kikyo for Kagome...Well, whatever it is, he won't get away with it!!! Update soon, I love your fic!
|
Reviewed By: callista [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 17:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story! Although you certainly could not have left a bigger cliffy! You've got to update soon, I love it and want to know what happens next.
|
Reviewed By: doomed nation On: June 11, 2006 17:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool i cant wait for othe next chapter dont stop
|
| Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 › » ] |
