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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2012 11:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I just loved this, I was temped to leave a review after each chapter, but I just couldn't wait to read the next... What an emotional roller coaster... And the sex scenes... 'Fans self' wow... ^_^ now on to the sequel! |
Reviewed By: anana945 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2010 21:57 EDT
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This entire story tortured me. With your fantastic cliffhangers and overall great storyline. I was literally at the edge of my seat. To be honest, i even cried a little. Throughout the story i was grabbing at my hair, biting my nails in nervousness. You should be published. I cant wait to read the sequal.
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Title: Shaelyn-Bobaelyn (logged out)
Reviewed By: Shaelyn-Bobaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2010 00:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an encrediable story, though I can figure why it wouldn't have many comments. You were brave to have a story like this circled around very descriptive rape, many people may take offence, or stop reading in disgust. Regardless I enjoyed it a lot, besides the harsh rape. Very well done, with quite a few mistakes, kept me on the edge of my seat. :)
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Reviewed By: Shaelyn-Bobaelyn (logged out) On: March 18, 2010 17:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an absolutely addicting story so far (I have found it a few years after it has been created, but I prefur that so I don't have to wait for updates :) ) I was wondering if you wanted me to fix up your writing for you. You have quite a few spelling, grammer and punctuation mistakes, no offence. It is always nice to read a fan fiction without being destracted by those small things. Just a small offer. :) My writing isn't nearly as good as yours, but my name on this website is Shaelyn-Bobaelyn, contact me if you wish.
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Reviewed By: johneotaku4life [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 19:59 EDT
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Awesome as alway's
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 21:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME STORY!!!I loved the way u ended it!I think u r an Excllent wirter!!!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 00:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. i just have to say that the story was amazing.. i think that you kept the characters real.. and i loved the way you wrote it.. it was beautiful.. it has been a while since i have read, a greatly written story such as this one.. and i just wanted you to know that!!! loved it and i can't wait to start on the sequel!!!
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 17:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg your fic was sooo goodXD i was hooked on it for days=D lolXP really great portrayal of the characters personalities...just wondering though what happened to koga? oh and i loved the part where kagome looked like kikyo at first when she was revived and then slowly as the life came back to her she became kagomeXD that was a nice touch=D great job!
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Title: Well Well...
Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 16:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutley LOVE Confrontation!!! Although it had it's weird parts and romantic 'Aww' parts, i still loved it. =) Only thing about this story that kinda bugged me was the whole Ayame thing. But i still loved it no matter what!! Keep the stories comming! You better believe i will be reading them!!
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Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 22:37 EDT
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THAT WAS AMAZING!!!! It's one of the best fic's I've ever read!!! NOT KIDDING! I saved it and am soo going to read it about 20 more times!
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Reviewed By: schung19 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 02:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the few stories that actually made me cry. But I loved every chapter of it.
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Reviewed By: Koniko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 06:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! I litterally spent an entire day reading this! that was quite a ride! my goodness. I about died when you said that Miroku's old gardian was sober for the ceremony that was so funny to me after all I don't think he's ever been sober in the show. lol But great job I look forward to reading the sequel! ty
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Reviewed By: Genie666_28 On: June 07, 2007 20:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic was amazing! I don't think I've read anything else that has kept me reading for more then an hour ( I'm serious! I've been up since 11pm last night reading this! I need some sugar real badly!) I'm glad you wrote this fic and i hope you have inspiration to write another one. You should be really proud of yourself because you have such geart writting talent -- one that people would love have. Once again, good work hun.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Wi[n]e On: April 15, 2007 22:35 EDT
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hmmm i got a question. if the well was destroyed in the feudal era wouldn't the future be changed? like kagome would never fall in the well and meet inuyasha right?
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Title: End of story review
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 01:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your original plot bunnies must have been male and female, because this story errupted with various plot bunnies galore. All created to making this one hell of a story. Some parts were confusing, but you managed to smooth them out. You touched on a subject that i wondered about briefly in the last chapter, about Ayame and Kouga.. Maybe you can explain what happened to him *kouga* in your sequel, ne? But im so glad we got our Kagome/Inuyasha lemon in the end. and it was a tasteful lemon too. Im going to take a break right now and rest my eyes, i've been reading this story for non stop since yesterday afternoon. But once im finished, im going to go on and read the first part of your sequel. Keep up the good work, Autumn
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Title: chpt 44 review
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 22:40 EDT
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*SCREAMS IN DENIAL* nooooooooooo! okay, i know that this story is done, and i have more chapters to read, but i have to comment on this one particular chapter. Im crying. Real tears, not just a figure of speech. The ending of that chapter is just too much angst and heartbreak... Damn. okay i need to find out if they all die now, so.. until i finish :( *weeps*
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 19:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn this was addicting...it was well written and flowed really well...I am psyched to be able to start the sequel
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 23:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap! Angsty doesn't even begin to cover what you've written. Amazing roller coaster ride I figured would end real bad...but it didn't. The cleansing rain was perfect. You have a wicked dark side that is almost balanced by the good. The ending was a relief slightly tinged in darkness..hard to explain. But I thoroughly enjoyed your story and am heading off to check out the sequel...once I restock my tissues!
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Title: A great end!
Reviewed By: Spinner2009 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 15:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The ending was fantastic! and Squeal* a sequel looks like i wont run out of great things to read for a while!
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Title: great job!
Reviewed By: Spinner2009 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 23:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
for some reason on MediaMiner reviews just arn't gotten as often as on fan fiction.net even if the story is really good 88 is actually a lot of reviews for here! anyway i read the last few chapters here so id like to say your doing awesome!
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Title: Con.II Chap.1
Reviewed By: trinity757575@yahoo.com On: October 09, 2006 19:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems like it's going to be as deliously and emotionaly ringing as the first one! And I'm so glad your friend talked or bullied you into continuing with the first story. It truly was an inspiring and beautifuly written and thought provking story. And I have no doudt from what I've read so far that Confrantion 2 will leave us breathless and hungerin for more. Breathless and hungerin for more, your fan Trinity
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Title: 2 Thumbs up!
Reviewed By: Empress Elf On: October 08, 2006 05:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have only one word I want to say to you. WOW!!! That has to be the best Inuyasha Fanfiction, scratch that, the best Fanfiction out of all fanfictions I have ever had the pleasure of reading. As a writer myself, I salut you!
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Title: 2 thumbs up
Reviewed By: Empress Elf On: October 08, 2006 05:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have one word to say to you. WOW!!!! Best Inuyasha fanfiction I have ever read in my life!!!!!!!!!!!! It had everything a story could possibly need. You had my on the edge of my seat the entire time! And as a writer myself, I salut you.
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: --- Eyes Of Deception xx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I started reading this not 2 days ago and every chance I get I read. This ending was so beautifully written. Your an amazing author. Please continue to write from the heart. Rock out Decept
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Reviewed By: diva On: October 02, 2006 14:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story and great ending really enjoyed it cynthia
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Reviewed By: XSesshomaruX [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 04:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG ITS THE END OF THE BEST FANFIC IN THE WORLD I LIKE HOW U RAPPED IT UP
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Reviewed By: chanda *nsi* On: October 02, 2006 01:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great story! From begging to end, I was enthralled with this story and always awaited your updated. I loved the way you ended, it was beautifully written. I will happily check out your sequel. Chanda
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 22:50 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter and even greater ending. You did a wonderful job on this story! Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the sequel.
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 21:41 EDT
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Wonderful ending and i won't steal your charaicters so don't worry.~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 20:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a beautiful ending. The first part of the chapter was pretty horrifying though. Inuyasha rarely 'looses' complete control and he seemed on the verge of doing so. As always though Kagome can bring him back from whereever he is. I thought is was a sweet, passionate chapter and a great ending to this part of their lives. Thanks for all the time you put into this because I appreciated reading it. Good luck with the next chapter in their lives. I'll definitely be reading it!
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