| "Confrontation" Reviews/Comments [ 107 ] |
| Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 › » ] |
Reviewed By: southnarutoguy On: June 11, 2006 17:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooooooo whats gonna happen next, joyoku is strong benond all power will this make inuaysha tremble in fear, will sesshomaru be strong enough, will miroku be able to make a stupid comement again? gotta find out
|
Reviewed By: demon overlord On: June 04, 2006 08:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story........... is sesshomaru going to go crazy or does he sense rin at all>
|
Reviewed By: XSesshomaruX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 15:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
personally, Joyoku wouldnt stand a chance if Sesshomaru is this agry, and neither would alot of other people. i was thinkin that Sesshomaru would kill everyone until he sees rin then revive them all
|
Reviewed By: Cricket42(to lazy to sign back in) On: June 03, 2006 13:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
love it loveit loveit. plz update more and plz don't allow sesshomaru to kill inuyasha. wonderful.~Cricket42
|
Reviewed By: XSesshomaruX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 01:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO u couldnt answer my request...BUT WHO CARES!! JUST KEEP WRITTING AND I STILL WONT CARE. I LOVE THIS STORY AND THE KILLING AND THE SEXING AND THE SLAPPING OF THE STICK PS:dont slow down, plz dont
|
Reviewed By: laina On: June 02, 2006 00:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it it is very consuming! It has so much action and plot that it makes me sit on the edge of my seat- I can't wait for more!!!
|
Title: lol
Reviewed By: XSesshomaruX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 16:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol the guy before mes request is funny. But it would make sence and makes me wonder why Inuyashas father is so big compared to inuyasha and sesshomaru and even sesshomarus transformation
|
Reviewed By: plz read On: May 31, 2006 16:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just thought of somthiing that should happen to sesshomaru. once hes has sex he has to inpower the power of his inner self like his father. the power lets him become something like the size of his father. it would explain alot of how his father was so big and why sesshomaru was missing
|
Reviewed By: Ligutidawene the large pickle On: May 26, 2006 12:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz contiune we all love the story duuuunnnnnnnnn stoppppppppp
|
Reviewed By: OF COURCE On: May 26, 2006 12:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u do realize that we dont review much because we are toooooooo stuck to the story. We all love it and its hard to tear our eyes away from the story
|
Reviewed By: Sweet_Obsession09 On: May 21, 2006 09:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that chapter. I love every chapter. If Sesshomaru does bring Ayame back, wouldn't she be reborn? Then the curse would be lifted and she could be with Kouga again.
|
Reviewed By: demon overlord On: May 21, 2006 04:42 EDT
Comment/Review:
can u change the color to black inasstead of yellow it is to hard to read thiis way
|
Title: BEGGING
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: May 21, 2006 03:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG OF YOU!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SOO LONG FOR THE STORY TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GONNA CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!LEASE!!!PLEASE!!! and...Oh. My. God. So good. So good. I can't even describe the elation I felt when I got the notice that this had been updated, and then the even greater elation after reading this chapter. I wish I had some criticism... they might be moving a little too quickly, but somehow that works. Can't wait till next update! and...wow... I really like your story.. I just read the chapter u posed. AHHHH YOU JUST LEFT IT THERE!!??? *sobs uncontrollably* Mother F&*%er! (not you.. just a comment) INUYASHA AND SESSHY ARE SO DAMN SEXY IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY!!!! I want them for my birthday! (or at least another chapter) My b- day is May 5th :-D just thought i'd tell you that(*hint hint**wink wink*. And wow.. I wish I was living this story or something.. THEY'RE SO HOT! sorry...I'm better now.. ok I'm gonna go before I start drooling all over my keyboard. Please add more chapters! Lemony even! :-D ok, bye, also I usually don't ask writers to hurry up and updte because I beleive it is very rude. But this one time I will be rude. PLEASE update faseer than a month. I don't think I can what that long. Another great chapter by the way.^_^
|
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 02:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
I too disliked the yellow, and found myself highlighting the entire page so that I could read it more easily. I'm glad that I did, it was another wonderful chapter.
|
Reviewed By: Cricket42(Too lazy to sign back in) On: May 21, 2006 02:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
i feel as if the yellow needs to be removed i could barely read the chapter. it wasy by the way i'm just mad cuz i couldn't see it. ~Cricket42
|
| Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 › » ] |
