| "Pirates & Mikos" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Kitsune no Faia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome. I can't wait to see what happens next with Kags, Luffy and the gang. Keep up the good work. Good luck and God bless.
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Title: This is NOT a flame, I repeat NOT a flame!
Reviewed By: dragon88 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't take my ratings the wrong way, please. It's just that your grammar is a little...er...way off in places and you need to space things out more into paragraphs and what have you. This sounds more like the dreaded...dare I say...cliche of Mary Sue falling out of the sky. Why don't try "showing more than telling" meaning that it feels more like we were sitting at a lunch table in highschool or something and you were telling us your experience. On top of that, if she had fallen from the actual -sky-, she would have died on impact, yes? Possibly even reduced to a liquid. You might want to find another way to have her enter rather than simply bamfing from the atmosphere. How would the transport work anyway? You might want to work on your plot and grammar and possibly find a beta-reader to help you out in your weaker spots. Good luck to you!
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Reviewed By: DragonsDarknessFlame On: April 04, 2006 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story there arn't many One Piece/Inuyasha storys out there. Update soon!! By the way the chapters need to be a bit longer no offense or anything. Also what are the pairings? can it be Zolo/Kagome PLEASE!!!!! well update soon!! Ja Ne!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: fallingaway On: March 04, 2006 21:41 CST
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I love it! too short though -.- but i still love it ^^!!!!i think it should be Zolo/Kagome!!!keep it going!
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Reviewed By: southwing On: March 02, 2006 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so cool, but is there going to be a pair like zolo/kagome or sanji/kagome. if there is, like it to be zolo/kagome
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Reviewed By: gothic fuzzies [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. I think Kagome should be paired with Zolo or Sanji. . .or both *~_^ It would be cool if your made the chapters longer, please!!
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Reviewed By: renee582 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 21:08 CST
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cool begining hope u update soon
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is my frist time reading a one piece/inuyasha crossover but it really well done!! glad i read it but could u make the chapters longer!!! ^_^ please update ASAP!!
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Reviewed By: Mrs cake On: February 24, 2006 17:21 CST
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PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE update! i love these type of storys! i've only read one other and they stupidly put Kagome with Yash! bleh! i say! she should be with Zolo or in an extremely warped world, Loofy... MRS CAKE.
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Title: chap 1
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon, I always loved reading Inuyasha/One Piece crossovers, even though theres so few of them.
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