| "Videl's desire, Burning Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: 2sweet4u On: May 03, 2006 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome!!! PLZ UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: spike shin On: March 28, 2006 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dbzchick101 On: March 26, 2006 16:21 CST
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update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tenshi of Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 14:53 CST
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that's all? NOOO! please update soon. btw, that wasn't a very good lemon maybe it was just because it was basically focused on masterbating, but still. it woulsv'e been better if Gohan was involved. I've read worse at least and from people that had written more than one lemon. anyways, go ahead. and the only problem with the lemon I had was you need it more detailed. ^^ hee hee. great story though. keep going!!!!! me likey!!
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Reviewed By: Tenshi of Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 14:50 CST
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that's all? NOOO! please update soon. btw, that wasn't a very good lemon maybe it was just because it was basically focused on masterbating, but still. it woulsv'e been better if Gohan was involved. I've read worse at least and from people that had written more than one lemon. anyways, go ahead. and the only problem with the lemon I had was you need it more detailed. ^^ hee hee. great story though. keep going!!!!! me likey!!
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Title: videl's desire...
Reviewed By: falana On: March 25, 2006 13:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
uhm..interestin....i didnt feel it, i guess, is aight...4 da first lemon.....keep ^ w/ da good work ^_^
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Title: Glad you UPDATED!
Reviewed By: gohny1129 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 08:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will always do the enjyment factor as 9 until I like the speed of UPDATES!!!!! But nice chapter, although it would have been better if it was with Gohan then the...........ummmm..... bathtub I guess. Although it was a good chapter though. Hope you update soon, and you won't take such a long time. Also, I hope the next time it's with Gohan.^0^ UPDATE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Goken On: March 21, 2006 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO that is friggin halarious. You gotta continue this. My favorite DBZ pairings are Gohan and Videl anyways. But really you have to continue this!!!
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Title: italiana
Reviewed By: eb On: March 19, 2006 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
1. thank u 4 openin dis write-review thingy 4 anyone...i've been readin sum interestin fanfics in here, but dey never allowed mi 2 review. 2.i like dis story, videl and gohan r not really my favorite couples, but I'll tell u dat I enjoyed it very very very much, and I luv what u write..good job! cant wait till da next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: desertblue On: March 12, 2006 17:50 CST
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Please keep up with this story because it has been one the best videl/gohan story i have read and i would like to see where you take the story from here!
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: gohny1129 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm giving you a 9 for enjoyment because it took you so long to update. Other than that I loved it. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Also I'm glad you made it longer.^^
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Reviewed By: Misery Child [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a big Gohan & Videl fan too and love to see their stories. I really like this one. Please write more with them. And longer too!
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Title: Why do we need titles?
Reviewed By: gohny1129 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would give you a 10 for enjoyment but I thought it was TOO SHORT!!! If you make it longer I would love it. I do love it now...it's just too short for my taste. I think that people should definitely write more of Gohan and Videl. I would if I have any ideas at all, but I don't. Which is sad by the ways. Also is this the end or are you going to continue? I kinda got lost on that part cause you said that it's a teaser. Does that mean you finished or you'll keep updating? Well good chater, but make it longer. Update SOON PLZ!
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Title: dark inferno
Reviewed By: dark inferno [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 08:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice idea, please update soon. It's good to see people starting to wright gohan/videl stories. Please update soon.
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