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| "Distraction" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: Amazing...
Reviewed By: MaroonWolf18 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 00:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been a fan of Gravitation for YEARS. I draw Yaoi Manga all the time. I have a full book finished now and it is Called Ame. Pronounced one way, it means "candy" and pronounced another way it means, "rain"... This title is a metaphor due to the story it beholds to, meaning that moments are as sweet, creamy, soft even, and can cause hyperness and even giggles, like CANDY... and other moments pertaining to depression(s), sorrow, and even clearity, like RAIN... The two main characters' names are Kuro and Shiro. Their names are also metaphors, shining upon their personality differences... Kuro means "black" and Shiro means, "white"... Dark and Light, views, thoughts, actions, etc etc... It took me three years to complete it... it is on normal sized, computer paper, ALL in separate Poly Cover Sheets, in a HUUUUUUGE, giant, three ring, red binder that says in PAINTING on it, "AME"... It is 312 pages long, front to back. I did it all in pencil first, finished it, then started back over, editing it, and finishing it off with ink pen. After the pen dried, I erased all the pencil, and put it up. I just finished reading it today... IT took me three days to read the WHOLE thing... and I was considering reading to again. But it is now on top of my computer desk, the one I am at now. If you would like to read it some day, I could send you a copy. ANYWHO... pertaining to your story.. I LOVED IT. I ONLY HAD TIME FOR THE FIRST CHAPTER BUT O.M.G.. Please keep it up. Such detail and wonder to it. I was glued like you would NOT BELIEVE!! I am writing a fanfic after InuYasha. I only have five chapters done so far, and I would appreciate it if you would read it, and leave me a review, either over all, or "per" chapter that you manage to read. Email me at FangBarer17@Yahoo.com to let me know about a possible answer pertaining to AME and you could reply to this review that way, as well... Take Care, and PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
| Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 18:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was really good, and i loved DA.
| Reviewed By: Yoko Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! HEHE! Shuichi is such a little devil! The part when Yuki was writing what was actually happening out was HILARIOUS!! I don't want to be a stick in the mud... but Yuki's birthday is February 23...
| Title: Definitely awesome
Reviewed By: Inuki-chan9 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 14:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap...that was hott, and AWESOME!! DA and this are such amazing stories! Keep up the good work!
| Title: sogoi
Reviewed By: Etoyuki On: February 24, 2006 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good i loved the ending when Eiri-San was writing all the stuff Shuichi-Kun was doing to him
| Title: Distraction: Distraction ( Chapter 1 )
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 16:44 CST
Comment/Review:
hahaha awesome
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