| "Death Maiden: The fallen Seraph" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: ninjanina On: December 30, 2006 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
finally!!! more please!!!! its just so good! oh and freakhorrorchick agrees! beingas i am her but stupid thing keeps logging me out ='(
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 20:09 CST
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Wow! Awesome chapter! I had to go back and read through the whole story. Such a dark mystery surrounding everything -- I can't wait until more is revealed. This is a Sess/Kag/Kur story? I feel sorry for Sess having to share her if he's been with her for so long and wanted to mark her. Can't wait to see how it all gets resolved. How many members of the Crimson curse are there? How did they come to be? Is Souta really dead? What happened to Kagome to cause those dormant powers to surface? What set her on the path of an avenger? Did she have those Feudl Era adventures with Inuyasha? What happened to him? So many questions -- so much great story to come! I hope you get a chance to write more during the holidays!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 01:00 CDT
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Wow! Intriguing! It's been a while since you updated this -- I hope you continue it soon! Though I find it interesting that Sess didn't convince her to let him mark her. From your pairing revelation, I assume he will eventually, but will end up having to share with Kurama? Heck, why not throw in all of the SD's? Yuske seems to be set up to need a woman, and Hiei should certainly appreciate the deadlier aspects of this Kagome. Keep up the good work!
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Title: Death Maiden: The Fallen Seraph
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: July 28, 2006 17:46 CDT
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Again I hav to say this was a good chapter. But still Im wondering where is Kuwabara?
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: July 28, 2006 16:53 CDT
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Woohoo!! That was a good chapter! Is Sango, Shippo, and Inu gonna be in it?
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: July 28, 2006 16:31 CDT
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That was a good chapter although what ever happened to Kuwabara?
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Reviewed By: ldychaos [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 14:40 CDT
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Very original. I'm quite enjoying the dark way your portraying the characters from Inuyasha, and the Yu Yu Hakusho Characters are well developed as well. I hope to see more chapters from you in the future.
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Reviewed By: bluemoon_175 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please you must write more. I have never been more excited to wait for an update. If you don't update the story soon I might start to cry. And, this story is keeping me on my toes. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON. :^)
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 04:42 CDT
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Cant wait to read more ^-^ Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: ladyluck13 On: May 09, 2006 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is awsome! you have to keep writing it :). and dont worry about changing miroku to an OOC becuase he is freaking cool in your story lol :P
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 15:56 CDT
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I liked that chapter! You got Kagome in it! PLease update soon!
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Reviewed By: Golden_Fire_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Nice! I like how you set this fic up. Will you be telling us how Kagome became 'Dark Maiden'? And why Miroku's aura had darkness to it? That and how does Koenma know Kagome? Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 23:53 CDT
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Definently keeping things interesting! I look forward to reading your next chapter! Can't wait, later! Michi
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Reviewed By: SessKaglovur [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is sooo awsome!!!!! I can't wait till you write more!!!! Are there gonna be lemons?
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