| "The Way I Was Before" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: lct105580 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2012 22:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic story! |
Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2012 06:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! You are the absolute best...please write more. Soon. And, thank you so much... Bravo |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2012 22:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a beautifully written fic. I loved it. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2012 22:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this fic before when I first started reading b/v fics, but I was too shy to review. Now that you've updated it, I decided to reread and review it. This is definitely one of my favorite b/v fics. |
Reviewed By: aredhel On: September 13, 2005 18:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story! I read all the chapters just now, and it's a BEAUTIFUL story! You are very talented !!!I almost cry at every page because of the strengh of every sentence you put in the mouth of Bulma or Vegeta (even Dende^^) , and the end is so ... AH i can't find the words!! Read it , c'est un chef d'oeuvre !! Congratulation, you're a great, very great author!!!
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 23:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was freaking beautiful. I LOVE how you protrayed Vegeta...it was a side of him that I have always tried to explore, but have never been able to actually write about. You have given inspiration that I haven't had in a long time. Thank you for this excellent (and I mean EXCELLENT) story.
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 03:22 EST
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aww that is so sweet
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Reviewed By: veggienkau On: August 13, 2004 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i dont know if you still care to see a review for this story, but man!! that story... i cant even... awesome! damn. the writing was just AMAZING! (bows down to the greatness of it) I'm so glad to have finally read a story about B/V that isnt about the 'infamous three years'.
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: August 07, 2004 22:15 EDT
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really good somthing really different from everything esle~
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Reviewed By: mary [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 15:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you put vegeta in a higher level!!!! i mean, that was amazing!!! that was WOW!!! OK...i'm running out of words here.....so..... i just LOVE i mean really LOVEEEEEEEEE THE FIC!!!!!! matta ne!!!
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Title: Damn.
Reviewed By: Schlichting [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 16:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cried like a baby. Just so you know. But damn, you are such a wonderful writer! To be able to express so much love and passion through your words is such a gift, and I hope you continue to write because so few people can do that. Kudos. Definitely kudos. |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop On: April 19, 2003 05:11 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fanfic! I know this story has been over for a year but can't help leaving some compliments! Very romantic, deep and well-written! This piece is probably my favorite B/V fanfic now (i've read at least 100+ of them) afterall, this is the only one I've read that brought me to tears! Can't wait to read more of ur fics!!! |
Reviewed By: Xorwais On: January 19, 2003 11:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God I don't know what to say!
I could feel both their emotions.. Have you ever felt it? It's so terribly strong.. I was crying over the last 2 chapters and my little sister was staring at me.. and I simply ignored it because I wanted to hold on to the feelings your excellent writing set loose.. mm
Thanks a lot for writing.. |
Reviewed By: Azrial On: December 09, 2002 04:12 EST
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This was a really good story! I enjoyed the intensity that remained between Vegeta and Bulma even after all the years of marriage. I found personally the romantic scenes to be so much more intense b/c of that fact. Their personalities were bang on and that too made the story that much more believable. I look forward to seeing more of your work :D |
Reviewed By: Jasp_jedi4hire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 01:09 EDT
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This was great. I loved the inner conflict going on. You did a beautiful job. |
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