| "The Way I Was Before" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: lct105580 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2012 22:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic story! |
Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2012 06:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! You are the absolute best...please write more. Soon. And, thank you so much... Bravo |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2012 22:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a beautifully written fic. I loved it. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2012 22:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this fic before when I first started reading b/v fics, but I was too shy to review. Now that you've updated it, I decided to reread and review it. This is definitely one of my favorite b/v fics. |
Reviewed By: aredhel On: September 13, 2005 18:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story! I read all the chapters just now, and it's a BEAUTIFUL story! You are very talented !!!I almost cry at every page because of the strengh of every sentence you put in the mouth of Bulma or Vegeta (even Dende^^) , and the end is so ... AH i can't find the words!! Read it , c'est un chef d'oeuvre !! Congratulation, you're a great, very great author!!!
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 23:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was freaking beautiful. I LOVE how you protrayed Vegeta...it was a side of him that I have always tried to explore, but have never been able to actually write about. You have given inspiration that I haven't had in a long time. Thank you for this excellent (and I mean EXCELLENT) story.
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 03:22 EST
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aww that is so sweet
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Reviewed By: veggienkau On: August 13, 2004 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i dont know if you still care to see a review for this story, but man!! that story... i cant even... awesome! damn. the writing was just AMAZING! (bows down to the greatness of it) I'm so glad to have finally read a story about B/V that isnt about the 'infamous three years'.
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: August 07, 2004 22:15 EDT
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really good somthing really different from everything esle~
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Reviewed By: mary [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 15:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you put vegeta in a higher level!!!! i mean, that was amazing!!! that was WOW!!! OK...i'm running out of words here.....so..... i just LOVE i mean really LOVEEEEEEEEE THE FIC!!!!!! matta ne!!!
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Title: Damn.
Reviewed By: Schlichting [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 16:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cried like a baby. Just so you know. But damn, you are such a wonderful writer! To be able to express so much love and passion through your words is such a gift, and I hope you continue to write because so few people can do that. Kudos. Definitely kudos. |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop On: April 19, 2003 05:11 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fanfic! I know this story has been over for a year but can't help leaving some compliments! Very romantic, deep and well-written! This piece is probably my favorite B/V fanfic now (i've read at least 100+ of them) afterall, this is the only one I've read that brought me to tears! Can't wait to read more of ur fics!!! |
Reviewed By: Xorwais On: January 19, 2003 11:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God I don't know what to say!
I could feel both their emotions.. Have you ever felt it? It's so terribly strong.. I was crying over the last 2 chapters and my little sister was staring at me.. and I simply ignored it because I wanted to hold on to the feelings your excellent writing set loose.. mm
Thanks a lot for writing.. |
Reviewed By: Azrial On: December 09, 2002 04:12 EST
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This was a really good story! I enjoyed the intensity that remained between Vegeta and Bulma even after all the years of marriage. I found personally the romantic scenes to be so much more intense b/c of that fact. Their personalities were bang on and that too made the story that much more believable. I look forward to seeing more of your work :D |
Reviewed By: Jasp_jedi4hire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 01:09 EDT
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This was great. I loved the inner conflict going on. You did a beautiful job. |
Reviewed By: bvtbear On: October 12, 2002 15:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of the best I have read in a long, long, long time. You have a real talent for writing, the style...kinda makes you feel you were there. Very creative, especially with the languages and good use of other characters. You also have the imaging technique down, making it easy to imagine what's going on. You should be a writer but if you won't do it professionally, then by all means: Keep doing it here! |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 23:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm. You need one more review. Make it an even thirty.
There ya go. |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 23:08 EDT
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What the fuck?
No, seriously, WHAT the FUCK?
I haven't cried in like, AGES AND AGES!
So now my eyes really hurt, dammit!
Because this story is so awesome, it made me cry!
Though... it IS quite refreshing, y'know. Ah well. Off to find some kleenex... |
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