| "The Way I Was Before" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2002 00:25 EST
Comment/Review:
I just reread this and I'm still blown away. Just thought you should know ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 03, 2002 04:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. Brilliant. Magnificently written. This is one of the most incredible B/V fics that I've ever read, specially since it takes place just before the Buu saga, a timeline a lot of authors seen to neglect writing about. The lemons, the angst and the depth of emotion left me breathless. Truly a piece of work. You should be very proud of this story and I hope you continue to write more (^_^). |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2002 03:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are awesome! And your story isn't bad either. ^_~. But seriously, your writing style is so beautiful that at times it's like reading poetry. I really love the way you use the five senses. I kept telling myself I'd read one more chapter then go to bed but I couldn't stop until I finished. I agree that not enough people write about the marriage side of thier relationship, which the view that most of my fics come from. I like how you dealt with Vegeta. Though no one can know for sure how he would act in an intimate setting, I believe your account is very plausable. I can honestly say that this is one of the best fanfics I've read here at mediaminer and that anything you post from here on out you should know you'll always have one sure reader. Hope to see more of your stuff soon.-JB |
Reviewed By: biggirl On: March 02, 2002 21:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So romantic. I could not stop crying when Bulma saw Vegita's memories from childhood. Please send more! |
Reviewed By: me!! On: March 02, 2002 18:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow..this story is truly, truly deep. i enjoy this everytime i read it and i can't get enough of it. glad that you kept the characters out of 'ooc'ness for they portray bulma and vegeta perfectly i believe. keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Eilleen On: March 02, 2002 17:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah. Very intense. I love it. :) |
Reviewed By: Ariele On: March 02, 2002 16:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you think i'm a little biased reviewing this?^_^ |
Reviewed By: kendraless On: March 02, 2002 13:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story, It was ehmmm intense |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2002 13:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo this story rocks. It's so original aswell. I think I've seen a story with a simular storyline. But not quite like this. And yours is much MUCH better. You can tell it was really well thought out, and you put your best into this story. And it really shows. You are a great writer, and I can't wait to see more. |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2002 09:17 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow this story just gets better and better! This chapter was amazing, i would have liked, perhaps, to have seen more detail focused on each event during the bond, but thats just me and my obsession for detail showing lol. It is probably better for not having too much bogging it down, a mistake that i am all too apt to fall into! I loved the fact that the bond was more angst than pleasure filled, after all sharing thoughts with Vegeta would hrdly be soft light, and roses lol. Is their gpoing to be another chapter to this, brilliant, excellent, wonderful story? I sure as hell hope so *^_^* Oh and now your on MM.org, you should check out the forums... lol its where i spend most of my time... come on... join the insanity dude! |
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