| "The Way I Was Before" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jesa Jaisai On: July 12, 2002 15:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful!
This is a great piece of work! I really enjoyed it! |
Reviewed By: Majin_Ouji [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 12:51 EDT
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I read this not too long ago. It's amazing how you translate A-N-G-S-T to us readers. I am a firm believer that there is no such thing as perpetual "sunshine and roses". A moment of that is all we ever get and it usually comes at the end of every story. |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2002 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not sure if I've reviewed here but oh well! I LOVE this fic!!! I cried during the last chapter! It was soo well written!!! ^_^ One of my favs! |
Reviewed By: Lady Hella [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2002 05:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well. . . i had to re-read it. 'Had to' as in had to CRY all over again!! *grabs a kleenex*
You kick serious ass with the angst.
And romance.
And characterisation.
And every-freaking-thing!! Now i'm off to leave a review for Requiem in Blue, i forgot to before.
Lady Hella |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2002 10:40 EDT
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!! This story really was amazing. You kept them in character and at the end it all came together so wonderfully. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 24, 2002 06:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY KAMI!!! What a chapter! What an ending! What a story! I became so entranced by it that I wasn't even aware that I was crying. I felt Veggie's pain while he was in hell and Bulma's anticipation as she waited for him to return. And don't get me started on the lemon. Let's just say that it was the most spiritual B/V encounter that I've ever read. I literally had a lump in my throat. A FUCKING MASTERPIECE!!! |
Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2002 03:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautifull I even cryed. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2002 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to review it here, too, to encourage you to update faster. Is it working? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 25, 2002 23:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG what a chapter! It left me with a lump in my throat. Excellent. Brilliant. Beautiful. Awesome. This is grade A stuff. I hope Bulma gets her Veggie back. Whatever happens I'm sure I'll need a box of tissues. |
Reviewed By: Dark Saiyan Prince [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2002 21:12 EDT
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Wow. Your writting never fails to amaze me. Nice work. UPDATE SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: Hetchi On: April 01, 2002 00:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was prehaps the best fanfic I have ever read( And I've read more then a person can count). Please write some more chapters!!!!! I really like a use of Vegeta's native language! |
Reviewed By: theblueone On: March 23, 2002 22:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome. i have never read a b/v fic during that time period, right before the Buu saga, that i enjoyed so much. you are a very talented writer. keep up the good work and i'll keep reading! |
Reviewed By: Annesta ap Diarmuid On: March 23, 2002 00:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This was excellent! your writing had abosolutely no grammatical errors in it (a rare find),and your writing style has to be the most intense and descriptive I've read yet (and that includes published novels). I hope you plan or are professional, because you sure seem to have the talent! I LOVE your story's plot! I would REALLY enjoy reading anymore chapters you have in mind for it! |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2002 20:19 EST
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This is really good. I'm glad I decided to check this fic out. Your descriptions are colorful to say the least and everyone remains in perfect charater. I look forward to reading future chapters...EM |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2002 04:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! What an amazingly, beautiful chapter! You do both characters (and little Trunks too ^_^) amazing justice with your beautiful writing style. Close to the end I looked at my scroll bar and realized it was almost over and I wanted to cry. It was that breathtaking. This is seriously one of the best fics I've ever read anywhere. Hell, this is one of the best stories I've ever read. Please do not think I am just saying this. I hope many other people check out this fic. If you don't mind I'd like to give this fic a little free advertisment on my next couple of updates. I really think this is that good. I can't wait for the next update. Once again, WOW.-JB |
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